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cypressmoon
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 382
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:44 pm Post subject: Fixed, Now what do you think? |
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This is my first pic it is supposed to be a Irish Setter please I would love it if I could get your comments about it and how you would make it look better! I used Photo Shop to design it so please if you have an sugguestion/comment please post it up thanks-cypressmoon
Last edited by cypressmoon on Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:36 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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animal_mad
Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 1341
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:37 pm Post subject: |
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cypressmoon
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 382
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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come on peoples you got some comments about so please go on ahead and post your comments! |
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Silvery_Pheonix
Joined: 29 Nov 2006 Posts: 2064
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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I know very little about art, so I can't help with conformation or whatever, but I think it looks amazing for a first drawing!
I'd just use a different color than black to do the hairs, it makes it stand out to much, I think.
Keep it up! |
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cypressmoon
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 382
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:40 pm Post subject: |
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thanks! For you imput I draw alot better on paper then with a mouse it is kinda hard to get your hand to go in the right direction but I am learning! |
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Silvery_Pheonix
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:41 pm Post subject: |
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I can relate...I can draw horses on paper...and horse heads on paint...and nothing else comes out even somewhat right for me. >.<
Good luck! |
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Bezzella
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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It is soooo cute! I love it. I would have blended in those black hairs a little better, but it is the best first pic I've ever seen! |
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cypressmoon
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 382
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:46 pm Post subject: |
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thanks! |
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cypressmoon
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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anymore suggestions please! |
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cypressmoon
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:36 pm Post subject: |
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I took everyones suggustions and this is what it now looks like!
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Silvery_Pheonix
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:25 pm Post subject: |
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The hairs look a ton better!
I'd lighten the muzzle back up to where it was before, other than that, you're doing really good for a first pic. |
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cypressmoon
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:53 pm Post subject: |
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thanks for your responce! I will go and lighten the muzzel! |
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Bezzella
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:58 pm Post subject: |
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I love the hairs. Much less distinct... So pwetty! *steals talent* |
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Des_and_Tay
Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 658
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:58 pm Post subject: |
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Hm.
It just looks in a kind of akward position, that's all. Other than that, it's gorgeous. |
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cypressmoon
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 3:08 am Post subject: |
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well, I was trying to get the show pose when I feel that it is perfect! I am going to be putting a show setting in the back ground so that it looks as if it is a Best In Show Winner! I think that is a great Idea! |
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