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Fixed, Now what do you think?
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do you like my first pic?
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no
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cypressmoon



Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 1:44 pm    Post subject: Fixed, Now what do you think? Reply with quote

This is my first pic it is supposed to be a Irish Setter please I would love it if I could get your comments about it and how you would make it look better! I used Photo Shop to design it so please if you have an sugguestion/comment please post it up thanks-cypressmoon



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animal_mad



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

come on peoples you got some comments about so please go on ahead and post your comments! Very Happy
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Silvery_Pheonix



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know very little about art, so I can't help with conformation or whatever, but I think it looks amazing for a first drawing!

I'd just use a different color than black to do the hairs, it makes it stand out to much, I think.

Keep it up! Very Happy
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks! For you imput I draw alot better on paper then with a mouse it is kinda hard to get your hand to go in the right direction but I am learning! Very Happy
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Silvery_Pheonix



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can relate...I can draw horses on paper...and horse heads on paint...and nothing else comes out even somewhat right for me. >.<

Good luck! Very Happy
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Bezzella



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is soooo cute! I love it. I would have blended in those black hairs a little better, but it is the best first pic I've ever seen! Smile
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks! Very Happy
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

anymore suggestions please! Very Happy
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I took everyones suggustions and this is what it now looks like!

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Silvery_Pheonix



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The hairs look a ton better! Very Happy

I'd lighten the muzzle back up to where it was before, other than that, you're doing really good for a first pic. Very Happy
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks for your responce! I will go and lighten the muzzel!
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Bezzella



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love the hairs. Much less distinct... So pwetty! *steals talent*
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Des_and_Tay



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm.
It just looks in a kind of akward position, that's all. Other than that, it's gorgeous.
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cypressmoon



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 3:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

well, I was trying to get the show pose when I feel that it is perfect! I am going to be putting a show setting in the back ground so that it looks as if it is a Best In Show Winner! Very Happy I think that is a great Idea! Very Happy
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