The Tales of Three Tigers~

[Chloe Taylor]

CHAPTER 1:

Tigger looked around, his tabby stripes visible. Him, and his two siblings, Stripes and Checkers, had been abandoned only a couple days before and they were nearly starved to death by now. Tigger lead his two brothers down the street, his tiny ribs visible. He made sure to hide in case any people showed up, just as he watched the other alley cats do. He smiled to himself as he pranced on down the side of the street.
"Tigger, watch out!" Called one of the brothers.
Close. Tigger dodged a speeding vehicle coming his way. "That's how you dodge a car!" Tigger said proudly.
"In your dreams laughed" Checkers.
Tigger glared at his laughing brothers. He stuck his tongue out and kept on, his tail high in the air.

[wolfgirl159357]

G o on

[Chloe Taylor]

CHAPTER 2:

Tigger led his brothers to an alley-their alley to be exact. It was where they had been born and raised. Tigger pulled out a few scraps of stored meat that he had found the day before and sat down to eat, his brothers sitting next to him. Once finished, the family began to groom each other.

[wolfgirl159357]

Awww keep goin.

[Chloe Taylor]

CHAPTER 3:

In the morning, tigger yawned and trotted out of the cramped box that the brothers had been sleeping in. He stretched, looked around, then batted at his sleeping brothers. "Wake up!" He called as he trotted down the alley.
Checkers, who was shocked from the noise, scampered out of the box and glared at Tigger. "You absolutely had to do that?" Tigger shrugged.
"Come on, wake up Stripes so that we can go get some food!"
"Fine, but he won't be happy." Checkers turned and awoke his brother Stripes.
"What do you want!" He hissed angrily. Checkers backed away.
"Tigger wanted me to wake you up so we can get some food."

[Bratterratt]

It's really cute CT, open for suggestions?

Bratterratt

[Chloe Taylor]

Thanx and sure Bratt!

[Bratterratt]

Well, the story's great, but it seems strange to me to have such short chapters. Maybe instead of chapters, have them in like sections, building up to a chapter? Sorry, I'm so technical, I know!

Bratterratt

[Chloe Taylor]

It's ok, and that's a good idea

[Chloe Taylor]

Stripes glared at Tigger, then stumbled to his feet. "Fine." He said reluctantly. The three walked down the alley and into the open where they saw many people rushing to get to the trains. Tigger led his brothers down the street and to the park. The siblings sat under a park bench and watched the squirrels and the birds around the park...

[wolfgirl159357]

go on