Critique Thread! (Come on in and see!)

Queso · Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 3597

Hmm, I think the wing may be on backwards? It may just be me, but it looks like instead of the front of the wing (where the bones are) being closest to the head, the ends of the feathers on the back of the wing are. So if the horse extended the wings, they would be facing the wrong way. Not really a very good description, but do you see what I mean?

Cowgirls Rule · Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721

Yeah. I'll try again. Thanks!

sandtiger · Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 8581

Wow, those meshes on the wings and the animals are awesome guys/gals! Unfortunately I don't have a mesh/smudge tool with my program, I got a blurring one through... I might try that! Anyway, I am agreeing that you raise the wing Cowgirls, but that's awesome so far! Is there any way you can get the second wing in even if its tucked? Confused

I am going ot try a mesh of my own, and try some more spiriting...

Cowgirls Rule · Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721

Here:

Sites:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/ramtops/2875202023/ -wings, http://www.flickr.com/photos/saturnino/1558784766/ -horse

sandtiger · Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 8581

I like it Cowgirls! However the wing on the right for me appears in an odd position, and a bit blurry, but hey, better then I can do! Very Happy

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Nice i just have to put some finishing touches on teh line art and i will be done

sandtiger · Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 8581

Ok, its official, EVERYONE's morphs/meshes is better then this one/mine! Shocked

I don't even have a smudge tool! I blurred it a bit too much as you noticed, but its supposed to be a Griffin I guess, cites are below, here it is:

Flickr Sources: http://www.flickr.com/photos/80835774@N00/4177293109/in/pool-stockthepark/ and http://www.flickr.com/photos/pete4ducks/4193709974/ and http://www.flickr.com/photos/skies_for_me/2681210129/

sandtiger · Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 8581

Please forgive me for not spruceing it up before posting. Embarassed

I still hope you enjoy.

Cowgirls Rule · Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721

Nice! Just erase the shadows a bit, but other than that, it's good!

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Finished my line art check it out

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Umm, I like it!

The chest looks akward though

Cowgirls Rule · Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721

It's good, but try shading a bit. Um, if you can find transparent line arts and follow Queso's tut, it helps a lot.

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Ya i dont really know where to find tehm and i know the chest looks awkward because of the lines that were original and i am trying to get adrobe elements

Angelicious · Joined: 31 Mar 2007 Posts: 4801

I'd like a critique, and I need to decide which of these versions is better Smile

It's for a contest on another site~

Version One:

Version Two:

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

Those are great! I think #1 is better though.