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sandtiger
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 11:25 pm Post subject: On The Brink- A Story of Survival for Two Stranded Foxes |
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Ok, so I am getting slightly obsessed with foxes for my own good, Creating A variation, collecting them, starting a lineage, making manips about them, UGH, Now here is a story about them! This is based off my idea for the creation, the Falkland Islands Fox Or Falkland Fox for short. I thought what if there were only TWO left in the whole world, a Male and a Female, not Romeo and Juliet people or Adam and Eve. SO this is basically a story about the last too Falkland foxes escaping and fighting human preduice against them and running away to the mainland to survive. Enough now, for the Story now!
On The Brink-Chapter One- Plans and Close Calls
I, Yasmeen or Jasmine, been running for the past Twenty-four hours straight, from The Alternate Ones, they prefer to refer to themselves as human beings. I will explain myself, I am the last female Falkland island fox alive, along with the only other Falkland fox alive, Scott, a complete stranger. I am also 3 years old and have wonderful emerald green eyes and red-orange fiery fur with black tipped ears and white tipped tail. Today I was headed down to the port which humans called it, to meet up with Scott. I ran down the alley with absolute secrecy, or at least I hoped I did. I then heard yells form behind me, familiar yelling, I ran...
"GAH! Where is that insolent little female!" Whispered in a very impatient manor small growl in fox language, Scott quickly hushed his mouth. did I just refer to myself in third person? Terribly sorry old chap, I've been hanging around that Cajun version of a fox too long... I quickly turned my thoughts toward Jasmine, the last female and fellow companion of my own race, the Falkland fox. I sighed, she was the last one I needed to be with, but she really was the Last one... I tapped an impatient foot or paw making sure to say quiet enough that the humans did not hear me, they wanted the last of us dead already, they knew we were alive and would hunt us down to the ends of this earth for all we knew. I finally saw her running and gasping along an eastern alley to my side and I said to her quietly,"In here! Now!", I gripped her with my teeth gently by her scruff and pulled her next to me. We stayed low an I said "what took you so long? Were now planning ya know!", she looked hurt and my face softened, I was a little hard and I said quietly but softly "Sorry, now the plans?", she nodded and pulled out her flower scroll...
Will go on but tell me what you think first! |
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wolfgirl159357
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:15 am Post subject: |
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i like it! |
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sandtiger
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks! I will continue later! |
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wolfgirl159357
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:54 pm Post subject: |
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have you read mine? |
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sandtiger
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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No, I will take a look through, continuing, need some idea's however...! |
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wolfgirl159357
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:26 pm Post subject: |
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ok how about a hunt or some enemy foxes a great war. |
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