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The Horror Story (kinda violent but no bloodshed is in it!)

 
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Daisy Rabbit Mae



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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 5:01 pm    Post subject: The Horror Story (kinda violent but no bloodshed is in it!) Reply with quote

I wrote this in language arts (its the middle and end to a begining, Im not sure if the begining is copyrighted or not so i won't post it but here is the middle and end also please tell me if you like it or not and what grade u think i'll get.

The Middle And Ending Of… The Horror Story

“You’re right mother, but would you please leave the windows open?” Patricia said as she gave her mother an evil laugh. “I hope you remember how to swim!” she said as she pushed her mother down the 34th floor. Mrs. Horror descended down and once she reached the 2nd floor she pushed herself down very fast into the pool. Then she remembered… she couldn’t swim! Those were her very last thoughts as she drowned in the big 45-foot deep swimming pool.

About two hours later, Mr. Horror came up, “Ahhhhhhh. Much better, you know… I really needed a shower break!”

“Your NEXT! I might not get you tonight but I will get you!” said Patricia as she went to plan her attack.

The very next morning Patricia smothered her father with pillows, he also died. Then Patricia pushed herself down and out the window of the 100th floor so if anybody noticed the parents died they couldn’t blame her.

About four years later the police opened the house to the public to buy. The Lunger family soon purchased the house, and moved their family in two years later.

The Lunger family was a normal family, never had problems, and never even thought of killing a single soul. They settled their problems by exercising after all their last name says it all. They like to leap. But after purchasing the house they got very sick so they really couldn’t exercise and keep their problems away. It seemed as if all their family problems bottled up when they bought this ridiculously cheap giant house.

On the first night everything seemed normal until at the middle of the night Mr. Lunger told Mrs. Lunger he felt like he was possessed. Mrs. Lunger thought that was ridiculous and didn’t believe him, so he moved down to the basement to sleep. The family really didn’t think anything of it.

On the fifth night Mr. Lunger murdered the family. The police sent him to a mental hospital because he said, “The voices, the voices said they were the Horror family, the voices told me to kill them, so I listened.”

After that the police decided not to ever open this house to the public and forbid anybody to go in there.

♥By Name not going to be put♥
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Cheyann



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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it. Smile
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