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Daisy Rabbit Mae
Joined: 17 Jan 2009 Posts: 1970
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 8:45 pm Post subject: The Visitor *About My Bunny Going 2 4-H!* |
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This poem is about my rabbit when I take him 2 4-H!
The Visitor
I saw her.
I smelled her soft lucious hair.
I knew she wasn't here because she was giving me a treat.
I saw her coming.
I closed my eyes and wished her away.
I saw my girlfriend run up the stairs.
I stopped deep in my tracks I knew I had to face it.
The visitor had come for me.
I tried to run as fast as I could
She out ran me.
I tried to wish her away.
She reached out her large pale hand.
I was caught.
Caught by the vistitor.
The visitor came for me. |
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Sverige
Joined: 15 Jan 2009 Posts: 82
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:59 pm Post subject: |
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wow that was good |
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Daisy Rabbit Mae
Joined: 17 Jan 2009 Posts: 1970
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:29 pm Post subject: |
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Thanx |
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