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Should I continue writing Poems and Story's? |
DUH! You totally rock! |
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Uh, sure, I guess |
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melrox333
Joined: 19 Oct 2008 Posts: 45
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:05 pm Post subject: Please Read and Comment. Very sad though :( |
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Neigh, I used to say in the paddock in which I'd play. My owner would take so very good care of me, and protect me from the fierce hot days.
I thought of myself as special because I was a jumper pony. But then when we went to a jumping show, I was called a lazy phony.
I didn't want to listen to this, but I guess it was stuck to my mind. So I wanted to show off to show the person that I am one of a kind.
So I started speeding up, I felt my hooves beating, and I could feel that I was suceeding.
But something went terribly wrong, I had the wrong stride, so I went over the jusp and felt no pride.
In a flash I had fallen and broken my leg, and was carried away by a person named Meg.
When we arrived at the vet, I couldn't even stand, and all I could see, and think about is my safe, new land.
I could feel myself lifting, I have no idea how, but then I suddenly knew now.
I was being lifted to my special land in the sky, where I knew was filled with pride.
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Bratterratt
Joined: 07 Jul 2008 Posts: 7533
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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Oh, look. You've got me crying! That was really sweet.
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melrox333
Joined: 19 Oct 2008 Posts: 45
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:32 am Post subject: |
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aw sorry pm me so we can be buds |
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Bratterratt
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:28 pm Post subject: |
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I will!
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:03 pm Post subject: |
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that was so sad |
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melrox333
Joined: 19 Oct 2008 Posts: 45
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 2:21 am Post subject: |
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ya I know... |
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