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Queso



Joined: 11 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:39 pm    Post subject: Help with sketch? Reply with quote

My tablet decided to uninstall its pressure sensing software this afternoon which brought all of my commission work to a hault Rolling Eyes. I can still do sketches though, and I've been wanting to draw the Lusitano in this video for a while now so I decided to take a crack at him.


Something about his legs are bothering me, I reffed them off of the part of the vid around 40-45 seconds in when he is leg yeilding away from the bull (fliped in my sketch because I can draw better when they face to the left lol) Does anyone else see it, or have I just been staring at it for too long? I think it might be the perspective playing tricks on me since his hanch is closer to the viewer than his shoulder...

Isn't the video just amazing? I feel sorry for the poor bull, but the horse is phenominal!
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Chilly Girl



Joined: 15 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 8:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that the leg going out in front needs to be a little big wider, but only very slightly. And I think the back leg that is furthest to the right should be a little wider at the top, but again, only slightly. Other than that, I think it is wonderful art! Very Happy
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milon



Joined: 12 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 9:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote



First off, that's a great sketch. (:

I think your head might be too small though, and the front, raised leg is too high up his body, I think you need to take it down just a bit. I think you can see the rest of my suggestions.

Good job, kudos to you, Queso. Better than me by far ;D
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Mystery_User101



Joined: 01 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 2:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lovely!
You did a great job drawing this! ^^
The only thing I can realy crit on is, to me, the ears seem a tab bit to small. But thats just me. lol
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Queso



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the redline Kat, I see what you mean about the left front. I agree Mystery, the ears are a bit small. You're right Chilly, the bck right does need to be a bit thicker at the top. Thanks so much guys Very Happy
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