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do you want me to continue Wild Horse Story? |
yes, i love it! |
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3_9_3
Joined: 06 Jul 2007 Posts: 60
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 11:31 pm Post subject: Wild Horse Story |
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A herd of wild horses made dust and made loud noises. The hooves of the horses forced themselves to go forward.
The leader of the herd is a small gray horse with a white muzzle. His name is Omen.
The slowest horse is a pure white mare: The only color like that. her name is Sparkle. But she has a reason to be going slow. She was pregnant with the most beautiful foal ever.
Days go by. The mare gets slower, but the herd moves on. The herd stops in a very beautiful green field. The mare lays down and waits. An hour later, there is a beautiful filly suckling.
There is a commotion with the herd. Omen is in front to see his daughter. The horses gather around the mare and her beautiful daughter which has just got the name; Julia.
If you would like me to continue this story, I will. Comment or answer the question to let me know. |
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Cecelia
Joined: 16 Dec 2006 Posts: 1487
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 4:42 pm Post subject: |
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It would be nice if you added more detail but its going well so far.
I love the names |
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3_9_3
Joined: 06 Jul 2007 Posts: 60
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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thank you, i will continue. =) |
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