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Leopardstorm
Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 4326
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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:50 pm Post subject: Gaze my sweet one |
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Eh a poem I wrote dun like it though...
Gaze my sweet one
Gaze my sweet one
Gaze into my eyes
I long for you
To feel the sweet unknown
Why must you leave
You turn and drift away
Did you ever know me
I wish you had
For everyday twas new
But every day you sifted further away like sand
Come back my sweet one
Gaze into my loneliness
Gaze into my aching heart
I reach for you but you slip into the unknown
Oh sweet one don’t go
I beg
But gone you are
Why
Where
Gaze my sweet one
Gaze into her eyes
Let her not feel my pain
Draw in her sweet scent of flowery nothingness
Scrabble with her long flowing hair
Never leave her sweet one
Always stay
But beware sweet one
Listen to what her heart says
For it may be kind or cruel
But sweet one
Gaze back
Gaze back at me just once
For I still long for you
I still wish to frolic pace for pace by you
But I live in solitude dreams
Only dreams
No harm done
But
Gaze my sweet one… |
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Ada Russel
Joined: 11 Dec 2006 Posts: 375
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Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 11:20 am Post subject: |
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You did a good job! Way to go! I have a hard time with poetry, but I can write stories! Anywhose, good job! |
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