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PinkStar
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 Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 6:33 pm Post subject: A short Story. by PinkStar |
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Finding a Princess..
There was once was a dragon named Jack and he lost his fire! Jack was very upset and he looked everywhere for it, but Jack still did not find it! Then Jack saw a very lovely princess named Eleana. “ I lost my fire “ Jack told the beautiful Eleana “ Oh Dear! I am sorry kind dragon.” Eleana said They looked in trees, houses and then- bushes! When they looked in a bush they found a little ball of fire!! Dragon took it and thanked the princess several times. The princess kissed the dragons nose and the next thing you know the dragon became a handsome prince! Soon the princess and prince married and lived in a beautiful castle! They had three kids and lived happily ever after… Until one day when The prince jack sneezed and fire came out! But that’s a whole new story!
Please post your comments.. I wrote it with my 5 year old sister.  |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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Oh..nobody likes it  |
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cutepony
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| Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 9:35 am Post subject: |
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it very good  |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks, I will be posting more soon! I wrote this with my sister, but i wrote the next one by myself |
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Chilly Girl
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| Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:25 pm Post subject: |
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| I like, very simple and short. |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 8:11 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh,thanks |
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KaylaBlue
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| Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 3:30 pm Post subject: |
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| *laughs* I love it, its's really funny. I have a 5 year old sister to and they can be really annoying!! |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 5:27 pm Post subject: |
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| lol thx!! |
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