The Story-A story by Heather- Chapter 1-12 (mystery-fantasy)

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

I will probably tonight!

shaggydoggy · Joined: 30 Jun 2009 Posts: 15113

YES!!!

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Ok here we go:

Left off with:
The man grabbed me...

Here is Chapter 8:

The man was in a black raincoat. I looked at Toad. I saw him murmur just loud enough for me to hear, "How come you never run when you should!" He huffed and took out a stick-like object. He murmured another thing but I was too far away to hear. A blast screamed through my ears. The black rain-coiat man disappeared. "Now will you run?" Toad yelled to me. I started to run. "THIS WAY? Really?" He huffed again. I looked at him apologetically and ran over to him. He shut the door. "What did you do?" I asked. "How did he... disappear..." I started to ask. "Geez. You didn't figure it out already. I'm 16 and can already drive, I have a "stick-like" object, a man disappeared. I'm a wizard." And that's all I heard before I hit the floor.

Feedback people!!

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Oh by the way, Shaggydoggy, that last chapter is dedicated to you! Your the one who always has the feedback! You Rock!!!

~Heather Very Happy

shaggydoggy · Joined: 30 Jun 2009 Posts: 15113

Boy am I blushing.Thanks lol!Go on!!Please!

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

lol im just finishing up the next chapter. I might be able to get it in tonight! I pretty much now how the entire story is gonna go!

shaggydoggy · Joined: 30 Jun 2009 Posts: 15113

Heather...pleause?.. Very Happy

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Alrighty here it is: (Sorry I was caught up in my short story...)

Chapter 8:
"I'm a wizard." And that's all I heard before I hit the floor

Chapter 9:(Mainly her thinking about what was going on and such...Not most interesting but an explainationm in the end)

I woke up and I was in a soft bed. I sighed of relief. It was just a dream. A crazy,crazy dream! Wait a second... I thought as I finally looked around. This isn't my bed.... I thought. I looked over at the room. Oh no I thought. That was no dream... I sat up and sighed but not of relief. Oh no, definatly not of relief! More of Oh my god what happened! Toad looked at me. "Okay, she's awake. How do you feel?" He asked. "Like... A BUS HIT ME AND THEN YOU SHOWED UP TO SAVE THE DAY AND NOW..." I never got to finish. Toad covered my mouth. "Chill. You're safe now." He said softly and took his hand back. "I need an explaination." I said and stood up. "Well?" I asked and tapped my foot as I crossed my arms across my chest. "You know the guy that shot the gun that night...?" He asked me. "Yeah?" I said. "Well, he kinda excaped from the wizard world. He's a murder and is killing innocent mortals." He said. "Why?" I asked. "That's kinda what you're here for." He said and looked down. "Why me?" I asked. "You're the... chosen one" He mumbled and for the millionth time today I fainted.

shaggydoggy · Joined: 30 Jun 2009 Posts: 15113

OMG That is AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO ON ONO PLEAUSE!!!

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

lol thanx

shaggydoggy · Joined: 30 Jun 2009 Posts: 15113

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Sorry, really caught up with school work. SO caught up may not have anything ready until... November 17! I'm really sorry about this. Crying or Very sad

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

OKay, its changed... November 14 is when I'll have the chapter.... maybe sooner Confused

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Here's sooner!! Hold on let me just start it as I normally do... Very Happy

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Left off with:
"You're the... chosen one" He mumbled and for the millionth time today I fainted.

Chapter 10 I think Confused

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I woke up in the same bed as before when I fell out of Door seven. I sighed. Tonight it was empty. Toad was talking with another girl. She was playing around with the curtains, changing colors. Everytime the nurse glared at her, they laughed. I stood up. The nurse came over to help me but I gave her a hand. "I got it." I said with a bit of an attitude. She grumbled something and walked away. I went over to Toad. "Oh hey! Look who's awake." He said and the girl giggled. He had his arm around her. I sighed and smiled the best I could though I was dying inside. "Yeah. Um... what exactly am I supposed to do?" I asked him about the recent -well I had no idea how long I was awake but...- information I found out. "That's where the magnificant Layla comes in!' He said. "Hi." She said, but she wasn't smiling. She had her outfit turn to black. She turned goth and Toad fell over on the side, completley unconcious. My eyes grew wide. The nurse turned again and all of a sudden she was back to normal, smiling, her wavy orange hair dancing around like pixies in the sky. The nurse smiled and left for her office and LAyla was back to being... well... dead. She was black and everythi9ng around her turned horrible. I screamed and ran away. Layla smiled evily as I left. Then she went back to her "other" self and Toad was awake again. Layla said sometihng with disgust and they both laughed. Toad said something back and he worded my name. I started crying and couldn't stop.