Ordinary Day's(p1)... The Afterlife (P3)

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Started a new Story...

Chapter 1: The Ordinary Morning

I grabbed my bag off of the bus and went to my locker. I grabbed my books for periods 1-4. It was always the same on an a-day. I felt like I did the same thing everyday. I sighed. Maybe today would be different. Or not... I went to Social Studies and sat down with my friends. The front row was full with the cutest guy in school. Him and his frineds. I sat down and got ready for my regular day. Rain began to pour down, hard. I sighed. I opened my binder to the next page and began to draw on it. Mr. L wrote some notes on the board. We started copying them down. Just like always. But something was... different. The air didn't seem clean today. I got so used to the way everything was this just seemed... different. I tried to ignore it but I couldn't breathe. Mr L seemed to notice it also...

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Ok...

Chapter 2:

Mr L noticed the smell. The boys in front turneed their heads and looked around. Danny, the love of my life, turned to look me after seeing Mr L look atme. Mr L grabbed the phone and called the office. The fire alarm went off. We all escaped the room. Danny walked near me with Mike and Adam at his side. Marissa, a snob, went out into the hallway with Marissa Ann and Julianne. Julianne was nice but the other two were not. We all went out in the pouring rain and stood their. I waved to my friends from different classes and they all waved back. I sighed as the rain pounded harder on our skin...

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Go on

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Chapter 3:
I waited outside. Still no smoke coming out. Still no fire bursting through the school. Still no fire trucks. Still no... anything. The principal shouted something but I couldn't understand. Tiana looked at me. Danny walked over to Adam and whispered something. They laughed. His laugh was as sweet as honey. I smiled. Mr L started walking towards an elementary school nearby. We followed. through the forest, all the grades went. Where we were going? Who knows!

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Hmm go on

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Chapter 4:
Mr L told us to stay quiet. Some of us looked backwards at the school. Still no fire, no smoke coming out. We sighed. Mr L brought us into a room with a veiw of the school. he told us we could do anything we wanted as long as we didn't break, touch anything or get too loud. I sat by the window. I watched the school. A fire started growing in an orange and red glow. I checked my pocket to make sure I had my phone. Mr L counted to make sure we had everyone in the class. I leaned on my elbow. The fire grew bigger. Suddenly Mr L stopped. We were missing some one. *dum du dummmm lol*

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

Go On...

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Danny?

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

This guy I know Marlee. Why do you ask?

Chapter 5:
Mr L grabbed the phone. "Yes... yes... mr M? Yes... yes... we are. Umm.... da da da... Kimberly. De la Pena. No sir. yes..." Mr L grew quiet. Kimmi was in there. My best friend that i knew since I was in diapers. The one whose lived down my street. the one who always helped me. Who used to punch the guys that made fun of me, who gave me food when I was hungry. Kimmi, the one who would skip school when I was ill and stand up to the girl who bullied me in fourth grade. Kim, the one whose always been with me, the one who my dad would say we were joined at the hip. And it was true, we were. Kimmi, me best friend was going to die and I couldn't do anything about it. Well, that's what I thought at least...

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Omo ong

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

OMG!

Go on....

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

(Thanks guys!)

Chapter 6:
I went over to Mr L. "Can I go to the bathroom?" I asked as the glow of the fire grew stronger. 'Yes Lilly" He told me. I walked out the room, checking my phone in my pocket. I didn't have much time before they would relize I was missing. I sighed. I had a plan but it was extremely risky. "Anything for Kim" I muttered under my breathe. I hid behind a wall where I could hear our assistant principal and prinicipal arueing over what to do about the school. I popped my head out. tehy couldn't see me but just to be safe I hid beind a board in the middle of the hallway. they were re doing parts of the school. I walked quietly behind out and finally started running, checking each door until I made it safely outside in the rain...

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

Go on... (This adictting!)

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Yes please go on