Do You Like This?

[Odelette]

Its my second attempt at drawing anything using the computer or anything so don't be too hard on me. *You should of seen the first drawing * Also can anyone give me tips?Thanx ^^

[Angelicious]

That's really good for a second drawing!
Now, I'm going to be hyper critical, so don't take much offense
For one, the ears are different sizes; shorten the right ear, make the left ear a bit longer, or both. (Unless you think it's good. *shrug*)
Shading is a must to make it look 'alive' (and I think, if that really is your second drawing, you could become really good at this - however, they'll be 50x better if they acutally -look- alive). The best way I've found to do this is to take the two shades and put them both in the color picker on Paint, and note where each lies. Then, find the shade a little biased towards each one, and the shade that's right in the middle, and go from there *can make screenie if that's hard to understand* (That really only works on Paint.)
Make the eyes a bit different shade than the mask on the animal. Make them -pop- a little. Try to make the noseline a bit more discreet, as well. (Use the shade biased towards the body color - as mentioned above.)

Now, hyper-critical period over. For a second drawing, or for a twentieth drawing, that's freaking AMAZING! I can't do anything on Paint >.< Not since I got Gimp & PI4, at least. I wish I still could, Paint's acutally a very good program.
Let me emphasize that a bit.
That. Is. Amazing. Wonderful. Awesome.

... I'm done. Enjoy future art/money-making

[Odelette]

Thanks so much that is great advice! I will folllow it and I'll show the third picture of the raccoon thanx ^^