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Marlee
Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 7:52 pm Post subject: The Story Of Me - A Real Poem By Marlee |
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My REAL Life In a Poem:
She smiled at him from across the room
He look up and met her gaze
She did not know that 2 years later, the gaze would hit a tomb
The wedding was small
just family and friends
thats all
They didn't want children
neither he or she
but later that changed
the feeling in she
She longed for a child, on of her own
to love and to hold
it would be all their own
But he got real sick
they couldn't try
for the child she longed for
until he was back
He later got well
and they tried for their first
she conceived her first, it was real swell
After a few months of carring a child
she got a call from the state
her hustband had been killed
The truck was in a wreck
what a jumbled mess
but she knew, he would be fine
because the place he was going was better than heck
Six months later
the labor pains started
the baby was coming
how could she manage?
A babe in arms
her husband gone
but some how she did it
and raise a fine son
The son grew in stature
just like his dad
and when he got home
his life pleased his parents
He wrapped his arms around them
and theirs around him
but no tears were shed
'cause now they were one
The only thing I changed was that the baby was a boy because daughter was to long and son was just right. |
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wolfgirl159357
Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967
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Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 11:50 am Post subject: |
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beautiful |
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her
Joined: 03 Jul 2008 Posts: 480
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Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:16 pm Post subject: |
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I agree! So beautiful! |
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Marlee
Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592
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Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:52 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks guys! |
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sandtiger
Joined: 30 Jul 2008 Posts: 8581
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Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:58 pm Post subject: |
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Aww! Its so sad in a way, but yet, as others have said before, strangely (in a good way.) beautiful! |
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