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shaggydoggy
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:35 pm Post subject: |
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I don't really know lol. I guess. |
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*~Trent~*
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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oh xD
grr i need Wolfie to come on so i can steal her ideas |
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barbaro800
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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I'm going to release this in parts, just so it's easier to read. It is from Vienna's point of view.
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June 14th is the day I died.
Sort of.
I was heading to an end of the school year party with my friend, and little did I know, she was about to have an allergic reaction (ironically, to her allergy medication) while driving her giant silver SUV.
People in the hospital asked what it was like to be in a car accident.
I just say everything kinda went black once the car ceiling hit the pavement.
Because no one wants to know what it feels like to have your skin scraped raw from the road pavement...or hearing your best friend's screams as she died.
The doctors at the hospital think I was lucky. But I don't think I was lucky. I think there was something else keeping me alive.... |
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*~Trent~*
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:49 pm Post subject: |
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nice! |
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barbaro800
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:51 pm Post subject: |
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My cell phone rang in my pocket. I pulled it out and realized my friend Julie was calling me. "Ready to go the party?" she asked. "Yup, I'm totallyyy ready," I replied. A few minutes later, she pulled into the front of my house, and we were driving along a highway to get to the party.
Julie kept sneezing and shaking a bit. "Julie, are you ok?" I asked.
"Yeah, I'm fine," she replied.
A car merged into the lane in front of us. Julie shook the wheel left and right, and fast. "Julie! What are you doing!" I screamed desperately. The car hit the guardrail and made the loudest screech I had ever heard, sparks flying everywhere. Julie started shaking again, not from fear, but she was doing the same spasm as before.
"JULIE!" I screamed again. She let go of the car wheel. I was about the grab the wheel and sit on her, until the giant silver SUV flipped off the road. It rolled for what felt like forever. Julie screamed, each time her scream getting weaker. The car finally skid on the ceiling. The sun roof shattered, bits of glass sparking on to me. My arm went through the sun roof, skidding on the rough road pavement. Blood poured everywhere, my arm burning, and my skin was completely torn.
I felt wet. I didn't even want to look, but I couldn't, anyways. I knew it was blood. I was on the ceiling. My seatbelt had somehow unlatched. I heard an ambulance. Someone knelt down near me. Probably a 20 year old man. "Everything is going to be ok," he whispered. He bit my kneck. I tried to scream, but instead, I went unconscious.
I woke up in a hospital bed. "You were in a coma," the nurse told me. "You're lucky to be alive."
"Where's Julie?" I asked, wondering if they even knew my friend's name.
"She's dead." |
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barbaro800
Joined: 04 Apr 2010 Posts: 1856
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:52 pm Post subject: |
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(oh, and btw, the beginning where its like "im dead, no one wants to know what its like to die" is partially copied from a book called Skinned. but its not copied word for word obviously. but then again, i also read another book about a dead person, and the book began like that too, anyways. so its technically a reoccurring theme:3 ) |
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*~Trent~*
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Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:13 pm Post subject: |
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nice =] |
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shaggydoggy
Joined: 30 Jun 2009 Posts: 15113
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 6:08 pm Post subject: |
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Suzanne awoke, a burning in her throat. Quickly, she pressed a manicured hand to her marble hard skin, it feeling like velviet. Soon, she gasped, stunned. Running, she made in within seconds, stunned, to her house. Slowly, she walked inside into her room. She was stunning. Though she had been a beautiful girl before, she was simply gorgeous now... |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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Great stories guys! |
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*~Trent~*
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:31 am Post subject: |
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The blonde haired blue-eyed girl gave out a huge yawn.
"Skyler!" her young-looking mother yelled up the stairs, "you're going to be late for school!" her young-looking mother insisted.
"Coming!" Skyler groaned back. She changed into the usual type of clothes. Dark skinny jeans with a torn knee, a plaid flannel shirt, and a pair of her favorite Ed Hardy's. She buttoned up the dark blue shirt as she ran out the door, backpack in tow. She walked to school, her pace a brisk walk. She approached the candy store.
It was then that it all went black.
Skyler sat up with a gasp. She was in a basement. She couldn't see very well, it was quite dark. Her blue eyes gaped at the person in front of her. "Mom...?" she said, gaping a little. The fake looking green eyes Skyler had grown up looking into were gone. They had been replaced by a frightening crimson red.
"Yes honey?" her mother said, her voice full of mystery.
"Whats going on!!!" She shouted, her bi-polar-ness restating itself in her mind. Her mother threw a yellowing newspaper at her feet. She looked down at the front page article. She gaped at the women. "You kidnapped me!!!" she cried out.
The woman laughed. the sound was horribly sweet. "Yes. yes, i did kidnap you," she said.
"WHY?!" Skyler yelled, hoping someone would hear her and rescue her.
"Cause you smell so good," the women said. Skyler was confused. Yes, she had a very nice smelling body wash, but she couldnt have used that when she was a baby.
"I.... smell good?" She said.
"Your blood." her kidnapper replied, "it smelled so good. but as a baby, you didnt have that much of it. so all these years i have put up with you and your delicious smell for this day. when i finally get to taste it!" the woman said, leaping at her. |
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wolfgirl159357
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:24 pm Post subject: |
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nice i guess you idnt need my help after all |
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*~Trent~*
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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** eh... im trying really hard to fit some stuff in though xD
The blonde haired blue-eyed girl gave out a huge yawn.
"Skyler!" her young-looking mother yelled up the stairs, "you're going to be late for school!" her young-looking mother insisted.
"Coming!" Skyler groaned back. She changed into the usual type of clothes. Dark skinny jeans with a torn knee, a plaid flannel shirt, and a pair of her favorite Ed Hardy's. She buttoned up the dark blue shirt as she ran out the door, backpack in tow. She walked to school, her pace a brisk walk. She approached the candy store.
It was then that it all went black.
Skyler sat up with a gasp. She was in a basement. She couldn't see very well, it was quite dark. Her blue eyes gaped at the person in front of her. "Mom...?" she said, gaping a little. The fake looking green eyes Skyler had grown up looking into were gone. They had been replaced by a frightening crimson red.
"Yes honey?" her mother said, her voice full of mystery.
"Whats going on!!!" She shouted, her bi-polar-ness restating itself in her mind. Her mother threw a yellowing newspaper at her feet. She looked down at the front page article. She gaped at the women. "You kidnapped me!!!" she cried out.
The woman laughed. the sound was horribly sweet. "Yes. yes, i did kidnap you," she said.
"WHY?!" Skyler yelled, hoping someone would hear her and rescue her.
"Cause you smell so good," the women said. Skyler was confused. Yes, she had a very nice smelling body wash, but she couldnt have used that when she was a baby.
"I.... smell good?" She said.
"Your blood." her kidnapper replied, "it smelled so good. but as a baby, you didnt have that much of it. so all these years i have put up with you and your delicious smell for this day. when i finally get to taste it!" the woman said, leaping at her.
Skyler screamed. What else can a girl do when a crazed vampire is trying to suck your blood out? The women bit her neck. The world got dizzy then. All she remembered the next morning was someone else prying the womens fangs from her neck...
Beep Beep. Beep Beep. Beep Beep.
Skyler opened and eye. she was in a room. a white room. the room smelled sickening. like sick people. Skyler sniffed. it had never smelled so bad before. She coughed. the odor was disgusting. she looked at her moniter. It was beeping alot. wait... but it wasnt only her moniter. Skyler looked in the direction of the neighboring rooms. she could hear those moniters beeping. and all teh moniters on that floor beeping! She covered her ears.
"Shes awake!" a feminine voiced nurse yelled. "Do you remember what happened," the women asked.
"No," it was only half a lie.
"Im so sorry..." the women began.
"What?!" Skyler snapped, getting impatient.
"Your house burned down. your mother died. im amazing your unscathed though," the women said. |
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barbaro800
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:45 pm Post subject: |
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(so she was kidnapped and wakes up in a crazed vampire house?) |
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wolfgirl159357
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Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:20 am Post subject: |
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nice i love it its quite fascinating i perfer the DRAMA filled stories i tend to do that often. |
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*~Trent~*
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Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:14 pm Post subject: |
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THIS is drama? xD |
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