the toxic breed: postponed!

[firebird!]

so we all know about my roleplay. all original, created by me, yada yada yada. well, in need of a good plot for the roleplay itself, Im making the story!
it will start out with Rim's parents, and the whole lineage starting from there. I'll be writing soon, but until then, nothing will be here! tehe, be on the lookout!


chapter one: strong, but not enough
A slender bodice crept into the muddied waters, whispering silently to another mass beside her. "We have to get them to more concealed lands!" She spoke in a hushed, yet urgent tone. Four littler bodies walked alongside her paws, whimpering softly. "But momma, we're hungry.. can we rest?" The pup's vocals were barely above a whisper. Her coat was wet, and her tiny paws were aching. But her mother showed no mercy to her daughter's cries. "Do you want to die like they did, Rim?" The female spoke again, snapping at the little one whom she had called Rimfaxe at birth. Rimfaxe shook her head, letting her eyelids fall closed for a mere moment. Her brothers stood beside her. A larger wolf spoke, the father. "Onward, my little ones. We shall be away from this place soon. Just a little longer," His words were promising, and they seemed to give some hope to the pups' ears, hungry for more of their father's reassuring words. They had come from far away, where chaos had followed their pack till they were the last of it. "Where can we go, Siera?" The male asked. "I-I'm not sure, Tsume. Just away from here.." She had said, taking one pup by the scruff. "Sleep, little Sabiy, we shall be there by morning," Siera soothed her pup, the eldest and strongest of her four. If he was worn out, she knew the others were twice as much his condition. "Tsume, take Osiris in your jaws, like this!" She whispered to her mate, allowing him to take their son from behind her limbs. There was but one pup left to carry, since she had taken another in her own jaws, Rimfaxe. "Can you take him?" She asked her mate. But he didnt answer. All that came from him was an ear-splitting cry. The she-wolf watched in horror as her mate fell to the ground, blood gurgling from his mouth. Osiris scurried behind her, whimpering. And the fourth pup, burried in the thick mud beneath his fallen father. "Tsume, you've left me in my time of need.. whatever shall I do?" She sat, and cried. Tears fell silently from her bloodshot eyes. A whoosh sound, and she too dropped. Arrows in both their sides, the pups stared. It was the oldest male who spoke up. "They need rest.. let us leave them in peace," He said, shaking his head and leading his siblings past their parents' unmoving bodies. Rim looked back once before following Sabiy, a tear in her eye. "Sabiy, will they find us in the morning?" She asked. Her brother hushed her. "But Sab-.." Rim was cut off by Osiris, who only shook his head.


chapter two: springtime blues
Rimfaxe pounced on her brother. "I've got you now!" She growled, nipping his ears. Sabiy giggled. "No you dont!" He said, pushing his sister of with ease. With a lunge, he was ontop of her. Rimfaxe fell on her back. "Thats not fair, your bigger Sabs!" She murmured. "Children!" A wolf called to them. Both pups perked their ears up, but immediately stopped rough housing. "What did I tell you about all this fighting!?" "Crest, we were just training.." Rimfaxe began, but was quieted by Sabiy. "Always ruining the fun!" He growled, "I was winning too!" The male said before running off to find Osiris. Rimfaxe sighed, shaking her head. "You know how he is about being the winner.." She said to Crest. "He'll grow out of it." The old wolf said, her eyes scanning the terra. A slight breeze crept along the land, leaving chills in each lupe's ruffled fur. Rimfaxe spoke up. "I think I'll have a nap," Was all she said before turning to her own den. She slumped on her moss bedding, falling asleep sooner then she expected. A wolf came up beside Crest. "I think they need to start their training. Obviously none of them have the nightmares about their parents, so they'd get good rest before their sessions.." The wolf said, and kept going on. "They've been here roughly over a year, Crest. We cant keep them contained for long." He said, padding away. Crest only shook her head. "I know.. I know." Rimfaxe slept soundly, no dreams even stirred her mind. Sunlight hit her eyelids like lasers, and she blinked quite a few times before waking up. "Morning, already?" She asked her sleeping brother, whom had chosen a spot beside her. He shook his head. "There is no way its morning.. I just went to sleep, literally!" Osiris said to his sister. Crest came to the den in a panicked way, repeating, "Wake up, wake up.. its a prophecy! We're having an eclipse.." She said, waking the two. "Where is Sabiy?" She paused, asking. Rimfaxe hadnt even known her brother was gone. But his scent was stale. "Whats an eclipse?" She asked impatiantly. Suddenly, something pushed Crest aside. A long white arm reached into the den, taking Osiris by the scruff. Crest fell on her side, moaning at the aching of her old bones. The arm took Osiris, and a few other pack members, putting them in metal cages in the back of big monsters. "Get them all. We need our animal testing!" One white man yelled, taking around twelve wolves total before driving away. Crest stared in horror. "They've taken my pack... they've taken them!" Rimfaxe stood beside Crest. "We'll get them back.. we will. I swear it with my life," She nodded, intending to keep the promise.


chapter three: at the lab
Sabiy growled and thrashed in his cage. "Get me out of here!" He barked. Soon he was taken to a large white room with toxic signs everywhere. Other animals and wolves where in testing bins, some even had unusual shades of fur. Still others were showing higher intellegence, speed, and so on. He was amazed, and stopped thrashing for a moment. Until he saw familiar faces: Faolin, Windrunner, Osiris, and many others from his pack. "Faolin, where are we?" He asked aloud after he was put into a cage bessde the two mates. Faolin looked a little plump. "Did they over feed you or something?" He asked her. She shook her head. "I am going to give birth.. but I dont wish to have my little ones here. I want out, where our pups can be wild again..." She sighed, nuzzling Windrunner. Sabiy shook his head. "I'll find a way to get us out.. I promise!" He said. The men in white coats exited the room after bringing in one last wolf: a beautiful female. She looked saddened, and gloomy. Sabiy was speechless. The man holding her cage unlocked his own and threw the female in, leaving him furious. He bit the mans hand, and soon the man had gone to clean his bloodied fingers. The female looked up. "Dont even think about touching me while I sleep. I will tear you apart, boy." She growled. Sabiy smiled. He liked her already. "Whats your name?" He asked. And she replied, "Shanaie." And thats where this story begins. He nodded to her, and said, "Im Sabiy.." His cheeks were a bright red. She chuckled. "Listen, fool, dont get all lovey dovey with me on the first date!" Sabiy only nodded. She laughed. "Looks like he's a bit starstruck!" Windrunner said from his nearby cage. Sabiy hushed him. "Liar!" He said. "Better get some rest." Faolin said, laying next to Windrunner. "Aye to that, my dear." He said, and nodded as they all laid down. Sabiy awoke to a wire around his neck. He was on a metal table, and he had atleast a hundred needles in his body. His fur was an unusual color, green and black. "Whaa..." His words were mumbled, but he knew no one could understand him. Shanaie was on another table beside him. She too, was odd shades of purple, blue, and silver. She was seemingly asleep. Sabiy couldnt hold his eyes open any longer. He passed out once more, and soon found himself back in his cage. He couldnt find the right words to say, so he kept his mouth shut. Shanaie was still strikingly gorgeous, even though she was different. Once again, he found her sleeping, probably worn out. With soft steps, he curled into a ball around her body, and fell fast asleep.

characters so far:
SIERA - the mother. desceased.
TSUME - the father. desceased.
RIMFAXE - youngest of her litter.
SABIY - eldest of the litter. male. taken by humans.
OSIRIS - second eldest male. taken by humans.
CREST - found the litter. mentored rimfaxe. raised the others as well.
KIBA - crest's advisor. a young moonwolf.
FAOLIN - one of Sabiy's pack. taken by humans.
WINDRUNNER - one of Sabiy's pack. taken by humans.
SHANAIE - Sabiy's crush, met in the testing labs.

so should I keep writing?

[SomebodyDude]

Sure

[firebird!]

oh wow xD I can see this is going to be a bore. I'll just call it quits.

[SomebodyDude]

NOOO!!! GO on!

[shaggydoggy]

OMG!!!! GO ON!! Feel free to use Shanaie or any of my characters the RP.

[*~Trent~*]

keep going! use my character too when you can! [but more toward hte end, cause im newer]

[wolfgirl159357]

keep goping i like how Crest is being used it suits her nicely, and dont forget to add in Shanie.

[firebird!]

right now its just my few, and I'll be adding in most of the toxics in the third chapter, so...

[sandtiger]

I really like this story, keep going!

[*~Trent~*]

Since Shanaie is is a toxic, she should probably be one of hte wolves already at teh testing place. and thats where Siaby and her meet.
and also, all the Toxic pack characters that join in later, should either be children of Osiris [if he lives], or a random wolf thats in the story for like a sentence, or got caught be the humans for hte testing after Siaby escapes.
so like a year after SIaby escapes, htey would have caught Silverecho or something.
some small ideas... i bet you already thought them up cause they are real simple =]

[firebird!]

yeah. I figured the newer wolves could have newly escaped, finding the old escape plan made by the older ones

[*~Trent~*]

sweet. i think a few wolves could be children of wolves that Siaby met in the lab though. if you want, use Silver!

Her mother: Faolin [little wolf], small, has a silvery look. She has bright green eyes and a bushy tail. has a pit-bull-like grip. she has powerful hind legs.
Her father: Windrunner, a somewhat large, lean black wolf with neon blue eyes. has an interesting whippet gait, from which he got his name.

i tried to make them a bit like Silver. if you want you can use them in the book.

[*~Trent~*]

Hey i had another idea. F!re, when you get a bit deeper in the story, can i open a post where people enter random stories of their wolfs lives? and maybe even take a chapter of your main story, but say it from their point of view, with their thoughts and feelings.
A story could maybe be something dramatic in their childhood that caused a personality trait, their name, maybe their first hunt, or something random! i think it would help us get to know our own wolves and other peoples wolves better. [does that last line sound dumb? lol]

[firebird!]

alright. sounds good

[*~Trent~*]

sweet. can i make it now? or do you want to write a few more chapters first?