The never ending universe

[marcy]

I sit. I wait. I know it's coming. I see the signs. As I wait all that can be heard is the crickets chirping. The neighbors light goes out and I know I won't have to wait much longer on this porch. The world is pitch black outside. a bolt of lightning flashes across the sky. But no sound is heard. A mighty carrage flys across the sky. Every one is asleep. The black carriage without horses lands in front of me. I silenty scream. Hades steps out with his dark cape flowing around him. I was expecting this. I knew he would come. He takes a step towards me. I do not move He snaps his fingers. This is the end for me. The frightened look on my face makes Hades laugh. a twisted laugh...............








Hey every one. This is an idea for a story. should I keep writing it give me your feedback

[firebird!]

if you take out the faces, yes.

[SomebodyDude]

Take out the faces and continue!