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Daisy Rabbit Mae
Joined: 17 Jan 2009
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 Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:21 pm Post subject: ****Horse Line-Art**** Critique Needed!!! |
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Okay, I know I had another thread, but that one just sucked, and I was out of practice, but I'm better now, and I'm ready to work! So here are a few NEW examples, you've never seen 'em before! I'm willing to take any comments or orders! I will exept only three at a time though.
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more to come soon, it took longer than I thought. lol enjoy
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Daisy Rabbit Mae
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:30 pm Post subject: |
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| I need critegue |
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SomebodyDude
Joined: 15 Aug 2009
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:49 pm Post subject: |
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| I think it is very good....But don't use the red background.Too bright! |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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| The lighter colors good be blended a little. I like the red, maybe a dark blue or green. Great Job! |
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Daisy Rabbit Mae
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:26 pm Post subject: |
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| thnx! It's not my best work thats for sure! lol I need a tablet! that'd be way easier than a touch pad on a laptop! lol |
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Ferox
Joined: 27 May 2009
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:04 pm Post subject: |
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Just a few quick points:
1. If you're making them for SBF, use the sand background from the forums and animal pages. That always matches.
2. Colour the hooves and eyes- it still looks incomplete.
3. The mane and tail need colour too. Perhaps a dark grey behind their lined layer
4. The highlights and shadows need to be softer or closer on the colour wheel. There is to much contrast at the moment.
5. The transition between black and brown on the near legs looks odd. There aren't many sharp lines in nature.
But it's a great start. I'm not likely to use any for SBF, but if you're willing to do them for non sbf things then I may order. |
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Daisy Rabbit Mae
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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okay thanks! and yeah I don't care what website you use! i just asumed most people want em for sbf. lol yeah, I'm not very good anymore, I need to do more practice, thanks for the points! I have a lot to learn I need to contact some good artists on here and ask for help. if somebody did lessons I'd pay a lot to learn how to draw line arts on the computer, and how to color better! lol  |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:37 pm Post subject: |
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| in my opinion it looks great but you should try to blend the colors a little moer. |
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Daisy Rabbit Mae
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| Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, thanks! I'll try that next time
-Daes =D |
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