Ordinary Day's(p1)... The Afterlife (P3)

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

there might be a few sequels. I wanted to make this story short because my other story is kinda long and I think people got bored. Anyway, just check back at this thread. It'll say "Ordinary Day's... and The Afterlife" That means I made the first chapter of the next story.

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

i like it

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Just wait for The Afterlife. But if you don't like creepy stories, don't read it. It's not scary but it's wierd and gross.

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

AWSOME!!!That is stuff I love!But yet I hate scary movies Confused

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I think there is somethin' wrong with me...

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

The Afterlife:

Characters(So far):
Lilly
Annie
Theo
Maddi
Angus

Chapter 1:
It was all so interesting and new. The place gave me the creeps. It has bare trees. the whole place is gray. The ground is bare. It's like a camera set on black and white or negative. Nobody was there. I had no idea where I was. Music was playing in the background. My heart was beating fast.

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

ok go on

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

Interesting...

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Sorry, forgot about this story. I always see that I was the last one to post so I think I posted on this. Anyways,

Chapter 2:

I kept hearing footstps. They were sneaking up on my. More than one. I turned. As soon as I saw the two people, I couldn't help but scream. One of the... the... I can't even think of a word for them! They were like aliens! Anyway, one of the things came over to me. I screamed louder which atracted more of them. Another one came over. I backed away until something normal, a human, came oevr to me.
"It's ok." Her sweet voice spoke like...like honey sliding smoothly down through a glass. "Sweetheart. Breathe." She said soothingly. "Your quite young to be here." She said.
"Be where?" My voice shook and the otehr's laughed. Two of them looked my age even if they were aliens.
"The mid point between earth and..." She looked at the otehrs. "And
him" She said and the otehr's made a cross on their body's and breathed slightly.
"You mean..." I asked and pointed below at the crumbly ground.
"Precisiely." She said. "Your in what we call, Between Town." She said.
"But where's Earth?" I asked.
"Oh, you won't be going there anytime soon." SHe said. "Your... dead."

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

really that bad?

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

No it is very interesting! Very Happy

I just wasent on when you posted it or i would of posted what I am going to say now... Go on...