A Story, I can't think of a title though

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

I saddled and haltered Amarxious and hopped onto his back. He ran out of the barn and onto the fresh grass. I heard hoof beats behind me and I slapped Amarxious on the side to make him run faster. My chocolate hair flew in the wind. A snake must have crossed our path because Amarxious reared, throwing me off his back. Pain shot up my back and legs. Kyler came running to me and kneeled beside my aching body. He called dad on his cell phone. My father drove out onto the hard, packed ground with my mother and 2 of my many brothers. My dad called 911 and waited for an ambulance to arrive. Mallina and my brothers came rushing at me. My head was spinning and my legs had gone numb.

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

OMG go on

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

The ambulance came and Mallina and my mother climbed in. Kyler snuck in aslo. I was hooked up to a oxygen tank, little rubber rounded spike were pushed up my nose. Mallina had managed to sneak some knitting with her, typical. Kyler brushed some hair out of my face.
My mother looked at me and tears began falling down her rosey cheaks. I reached my hand up and touched hers. She grasped it and kissed it. When we arrived at the hospital, I was surprised to see our family bus sitting in the parking lot. I was transported into a white room with a white bed, with white sheets and a white pillow. I sighed, darn I though, I wasn't lucky enough to get an orange room.

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

continue.

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Ok I will write it tonight. I have to go soon

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

Cowgirls Rule · Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721

Critique?

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

Wonderful Marlee!

Rolling Eyes

But I still can't think of any title for it!!!!

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Sure COwgirls

Somebodydude, niether can I, and I wrote it!

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

What about "A ordinary life"

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Ordinary, but not so Ordinary - maybe.

SomebodyDude · Joined: 15 Aug 2009 Posts: 4997

No Heather just named her last story close to that...

wolfgirl159357 · Joined: 07 Aug 2009 Posts: 19967

"The life of a ordinary girl turned around

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

True, Ok I have more, Here it goes.

I was feeling better already. I had received an x-ray that had reported no broken bones! Mallina came in and walked over to my white bed. She squished a burnt orange hat onto my brunette head. She then stepped back and admired her work. I reached up to the orange lump of yarn.
"Oh Mallina, is this what you have been working on!?" I asked in awe
"Yeah." She replied humbly
My back still ached but I reached forward to give her a squeeze. One pair of twins stood in the dorrway of my white room. We had 10 pairs of twin in our family and 1 trio of triplets which I was one of. I smiled warmly at Caydence adn Clayton as they peeked inside the white room.
"Come here!" I greeted with my arms outstreached.The ran to me and crawled onto the bed. They snuggled into the blankets, their eyes wondering.