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shaggydoggy
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| Aww.GO!RIGHT MORE!!!PLEAUISE! |
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Heather
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| Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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| okay... |
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Heather
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| Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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Left off with:
I started crying and couldn't stop.
Chapter 10(now... 
I sat there all day. Finally, Toad came after me. "What's wrong with you? You left Layla." he said. He was mad, not joking around. "What's wrong with me? Whats wrong with you? You go on and on about how wonderful she is and then you faint when she turns all evil!' I yell at him. Layla walks up to us. "So sweetheart.." She said not noticing me. "Come on Layla.... leave her." Toad said and they both laughed. "Your on your own now. Find the criminal and capture him. then never come back." Toad said and walked away with Layla. "I don't even know how to come here or go home!" I cried. I screamed and shouted and wailed. I bent down on my knees. |
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Heather
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| Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Anything? |
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:30 pm Post subject: |
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| Well ya!I love it! When can you write more? |
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Heather
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| Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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| I will get there.... probably soon |
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Heather
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| Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:52 pm Post subject: |
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Left off with:
I bent down on my knees.
Chapter 11:
I fell asleep on the floor. I woke up in my bed. I sighed... it was all a dream. Thank goodness! I said to myself as I checked the time. It was 6:30am. Almost time for school, I thought to myself. I got dressed and brushed my teeth. Something was different though. the house seemed... quiet. Usually my mom would be argueing with my older sister or my younger brother unti I left. I sighed. Maybe it was Saturday, I thought and I went into my moms room. She wasn't there. I went to my little brotehrs room. He wasn't there either. I checked the driveway for my sisters car. It was there and I sighed with relief. I checked her room, the basement, but she wasn't there. I looked around for a note or a message or something. Nothing. Not until I fopund a small pot-it note on the table. I looked at it and my eyes started to water... |
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:53 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh!Looks great! |
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Heather
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| Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:09 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 12:
I looked at the note. It read: We've gone away for.. a while. Take care of yourself for some time. We'll be back when we can. Do the right thing, sweetie. ~Mom "Gone away?" I asked myself. "And what does she mean 'Do the right thing'?" I spoke aloud. I sighed. I needed to get back and see Toad. The day passed on. As it became dark and I went down to the beach. I thought about all that had happened. I walked along the sand as the waves crashed the shore. A man came out of the shadow. "Are you Alexis?"
Feedback! And sorry it took so long I forgot I had this going on and I got caught up with schoolwork. |
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