Please comment - My First Story

[wolfgirl159357]

omg continue

[Marlee]

Blooked was spilling out of my cut leg, I winced at the site. It drizzled onto the carpeted floor. Mr.V scooped me up and laid me on a clean area of carpet. My leg and turned a sickining red color and it made my stomach turn summer saults. It was quickly rapped in an ace bandge. I limped painfully to my locker. Mr.V shook his head "You can't leave"

[wolfgirl159357]

come on go on

[Marlee]

I turned to look at him "Why?" I asked. and sat down on a desk by Toby. "We can't leave yet. They are still out there." It came to me, The scream came from my own lips, I had been uncountious. My mouth must have been open for awhile because a hand was waving in front of my face "Earth to J.J Earth to Jaymee" Toby said. I shook my head, "SO I was shot?!"

[wolfgirl159357]

go on

[Marlee]

Toby, Mr. Jakeobsen and Mr. V nodded their heads. I looked at the hole in my leg, yuck. Blood drained out like water out of a fountain. The blood looked thick and mooshy. I grimanced at the sight.

[wolfgirl159357]

Ewwwww go on!

[Marlee]

Toby ripped some of his shirt and wipped off my leg. He went to the garbage can and threw the bloody cloth away. Mr. V took an Ace Bandge out of his pocket and wrapped up my leg. The threads of the bandge stung my cut. MY eyes began to water and I winced when I tried to stand.

[wolfgirl159357]

Awww go on