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Marlee
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I sat on the stairs and the door opened behind me. I jumped up in true surprize. Mr.J was standing in the doorway. "Ireland?" He asked cocking his head, 'Do you need something?" I nodded my head, "I need to get away from my dad." He looked puzzled "YOu better come in" I walked in a sighed "THis is my story." I said as I began the worst past you could possibly imagine.
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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| love it dont forget the other story. |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:37 pm Post subject: |
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| I won't I will think about it while I am watching the apple cup. |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:38 pm Post subject: |
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| ???? whats that |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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| Its a big football game between two college football teams, Huskies and Cougers, GO HUSKIES!!!! When we stoped watching it it was 20-0 Huskies favor |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:32 pm Post subject: |
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| oh ok |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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| YOUR ON!!!!! Hurrah!!! |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:34 pm Post subject: |
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| LOL |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:07 pm Post subject: |
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| Ireland told everything to Mr. J. His face looked at her. "You have to get out of there" He said with determination. Ireland looked at the ground. "I can't my dad is ALWAY sitting at the table" She mumbled. "Plus, I have no where to go if I did leave anyway." She explained Mr.J looked at her. You could come here. Ireland looked at him with amazment, her mouth gapping. A young woman came around the corner, "Kyle" she said. |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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| Come on keep goin with the other one too |
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ChocolateGal
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| Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:17 am Post subject: |
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| Yes, please keep on going, this is good |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:12 pm Post subject: |
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Oh thax Choco, I didn't see that you had posted here.
Ireland looked at the woman of about 27. She looked at Mr.J, "I must be going now." She said hurridly, getting out of her chair. "No, wait." The woman said, "Who are you?" She asked kindly walking nearer to the girl. "My name is Ireland, I live next door." Ireland replied, "But really, I must be going." She added as she rushed out the door. |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Keep going |
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Marlee
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| Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:06 pm Post subject: |
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*I completely forgot about this!!!*
Ireland hurried behind her house and snuck into the backdoor, leaving it open so her father couldn't hear her. She tiptoed up the stairs to her room, and got inside as quietly as possible. She didn't dare lay down for fear blood would stain her only possesion, her bed spread. "How could Mr. J like me?" She thought "I'm nobody" |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Keep it goin lol |
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