Investigation (A Twilight Fanfiction)

[Cowgirls Rule]

Well, I got bored and started to write this. Please critique, this is my first fanfiction.

Key:
POV= point of view, it will always be first person
C= Charlotte
E= Emmett


Investigation


CPOV

I walked into the hallways of my new school, Forks High. I walked into my first class, biology. Well at least that was one subject I was good at. I walked over to the teacher and handed him my note.

"Hm, very well. You may sit next to Emmett over there," He replied.

He had pointed over to a guy with deep brown, almost a chocolate brown hair with pale skin and golden eyes.

This school and town just keeps getting weirder and weirder by the minute. I didn't know golden eyes were possible,I thought.

I put my stuff down and looked up at the assignment on the board. Identify the substance on the slide, the board read. I looked at the table and slid the microscope over. I placed the slide carefully under the lens. I set it at the lowest level and focused it. Immediately my brain found a match to the substance, it was a part of a flower. Oh what was the word for it....anther! That was it!

"I think it's an anther," I mumbled.

I jotted it down in my chemistry notes and waited for Emmett to double check my work.

[cocanut33]

I think is awesome

[Cowgirls Rule]

Thanks! I'll continue more when I have more time.

[sandtiger]

I just read, It's really good Cowgirls!

[Cowgirls Rule]

Okay! Here's a bit more:

EPOV:

I dragged over the microscope, expecting to have to correct her. I pressed my eyes to the lens and focused the image. Sure enough it was an anther. Most of my biology partners hadn't been too bright. They were all hanging over me and stuff. I heard the bell ring and I grabbed my stuff and switched off the microscope. I headed out to the parking lot to my jeep.


CPOV:

I heard the bell ring and grabbed my stuff. I walked out of school and into the parking lot. I made my way over to the car. I had put my stuff into the cab and was about to get in, when out of no where Lauren, the school snobby girl, walked up to me and asked me if I would go dress shopping with Lauren and her. I was a little surprised and confused, was today pick on the new girl day?

"Uh, sure," I replied.

Wait, why did I even agree to go shopping when I hated shopping. I sighed and looked around my truck to make sure I hadn't left anything in my haste. I looked up and noticed Emmett staring at me. I quickly ducked and hopped into the drivers seat.

[shaggydoggy]

Oh!Go on I <3 it!

[Cowgirls Rule]

Aww. Thanks! I wrote like six or seven pages so far. I just haven't had time to proofread it.

[Cowgirls Rule]

Okay! More! This is just off the top of my head. I don't have my journal with me. But this is like super close to what I wrote in it.

CPOV:

I parked my truck and dashed into the house. I ran upstairs, only tripping twice. Thank goodness. I grabbed out my best clothes and quickly dressed. I finished and slid up my cell. Oh, good. I had a few extra minutes. I picked up my latest vampire book and suddenly froze.

"Huh, it states that in the book vampires have pale skin. What a coincidence, Emmett's got pale skin too," I said out loud.

I put it down as I heard a car pull up. I opened the door expecting to see Lauren and Jessica. But instead I was surprised by some men in black trying to kidnap me. I felt my hands bound behind my back, and I screamed blood murder.

[Cheyann]

I love it more!

[Cowgirls Rule]

Thanks! I'll update it when I have time, I left my journal at school.

[Cheyann]

Why Cowgirls you have fans!

[Cowgirls Rule]

lol. Okay, got it back! Here's more:

Emmett POV:

I had seen those guys that Lauren and Jessica had hired to kidnap Charlotte. I raced to her rescue just before she screamed. I untied the rope, making sure not to be seen, and grabbed it and grabbed a fabric cloth and gagged and tied up one of the guys dressed in black. Charlotte struggled out of her bonds and accidentally slipped backwards. I ran over at super sonic speed and picked her up. She just stood there, stunned. I called the police on these men. She looked at me, confused.

“What are you doing here?” She asked.

“Well, I um…” I stammered.

She blushed and ran upstairs.

Charlotte POV:

I started to call the police to phone my dad, Charlie, when I heard sirens. Oh great, he called the police. I sighed and lay on my bed. Suddenly my cell phone rang,
I’m in the business of misery let’s take it from the top, I flipped open my cell.

“Hello,” I answered.

“Hey, It’s Emmett, I’m really sorry about that, I just happened to be somewhere nearby and heard you scream and came to your help,” Emmett babbled.

“And,” I replied.

“Would you like to go to dinner at my house as an apology?” Emmett asked.

I had been waiting for this day since I saw him at lunch.

“Sure, that would be great,” I chocked out.

“Great, I’ll be waiting for you outside,” Emmett replied and hung up.

I sighed and grabbed my purse and headed outside.

“Ready?” Emmett asked.

I nodded. I noticed that he opened the door for me. I thanked him and hopped into the passenger seat. I buckled up and noted to myself that he didn’t A) put on a seatbelt and B) drive at sane speeds. He drove us to a small meadow. He looked at me.

[sandtiger]

Cliff hanger AND the beginning of it guessing, you are tempting me to stare tat this screen until the next update comes, great work!

[~~rose~~]

is this a remake of twilight? only changing to emmet and rosalie, or changing their names? Mixing it up or something? I like memorized the twilight book, and that's sorta messing me up.

[Cowgirls Rule]

Sand- lol, I didn't mean to do it, I just kind of typed two pages from my journal and it turned out this way.

Rose- Yes, it is a bit, except that the sequence of events is a bit different and there is a different pair and a few characters are pretty much eliminated.

I'll update today soon.