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*Sighs* Suggestions or Criticue, on Manips!
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How well do you like these, Honestly?
I WUB THEM!!! Can I order One PWEASE?!!?!?
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I like them and there great!
40%
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There Ok, But need a few things changed.
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Nah, I don't like them much at all, but there not HORIBBLE.
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There bad and need many changes.
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there absolutely hedious and I'm ashamed for you to be a manip maker
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:05 pm    Post subject: *Sighs* Suggestions or Criticue, on Manips! Reply with quote

Ok, I checked the options on my program, apparently the best of which I can do is add a slights shadow, sharpen it, blend with background, change color, font and any lighting things. Can one of you tell me which would hep blend the text best please? Oh, and there is a pool. *Hopes it works*, but here are two manips I have done recently I would like criticized and suggestions on please.





I finally found out how to add a black border and a thin black line against my text, it looks a LOT better, Thanks so much to you guys/gals! I was experimenting her actully, so that was a surprise, is this one any better?



Flickr sopurces: http://www.flickr.com/photos/80502454@N00/2454174937/ and http://www.flickr.com/photos/wildphotons/458320232/








an Eagle I wanted to do for my Steller's sea eagle's baby, I need to work on wings a bit and text lighting. what do you think? I didn't bother on much, except sharpening the eagle and background a bit.

Flickr Source of Course! (It Rhymes!): http://www.flickr.com/photos/72213316@N00/3151525302/in/set-72157611877839166/ And http://www.flickr.com/photos/lindajh/1741991787/


And The other! (Note: this was done before the above or first one!)






This One was for my only Owl I think, I might have released him through. I tried to match the color of the text to the owl, and the background. This I think I added a slight shadow too.


Thanks, Yes I'm annoying with all my Criticue threads, I just want to take people's suggestions, as you can see I like it. Don't get on me please,

Sandtiger


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shaggydoggy



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OMG I love them!!!!!Can we order one similar to those?
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Cowgirls Rule



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like them. If it were possible, you might want to smoothen the edges of the feathers so they look more natural, and not so ridgid.
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure Shaggy, go to my manip shop. and Thanks Cowgirls, That's what I meant by the wings, It's weird... Oh! And Poll added, please vote!
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shaggydoggy



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry, I'm having my teper rise.Maybe later...
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, Sorry...
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Ferox



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your cutting is great, and your selection of subject and background work well together. There are a few thign sI would try though.

Black lines. Putting a thin black border around an image can go a long way to making them look finished. Don't underestimate it.

A thin black line around the text sometimes helps too.

Tweak your stock images colour balance, brightness and darkness. The eagle looks unnaturally blue against the background, and looks dark. The owl looks very bright for a misty forest.

Does that make sense? Keep practicing and keep experimenting.
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yup it makes sense! Thanks, I did no think about adding a border!
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wolfgirl159357



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

loves them allll
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you all guys and Gals! I finally found out how to add a thin border and blackness/shadow around the text! It looks a lot better... Now just have to tweak that lighting! What do you think of the new one?
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Marlee



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No offence to your others but I lOVE IT SO MUCH MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Marlee, No offense taken Smile .
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Marlee



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Wipes sweat off forehead and sighs a sigh of relief*
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Ferox



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aeropetal looks so much better. The text looks like you used an 'embed or emboss' effect, not knowing how your program works. Keep experimenting.

Btw, can you do soft erases, blur and transparencies? If so I have another tip for you.
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Embed and Embossed effect, never heard of that, Yup, I can do all three to be exact.
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