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Amandaaa
Joined: 01 Oct 2009 Posts: 20
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:33 pm Post subject: Why must it be me? |
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"Huny wake up" thats the sound i hear ever moring. "5 more min."
"NO GET UP U HAVE TO GET READY FOR SCHOOL" FINE!" Lexi got up from her bed and got dressed. Thinks to slef *what should i wear* "HURRY UP THE BUS IS GOING TO BE HERE IN 10 MIN" "UGH FINE I WILL BE THERE IN 1 MIN." WELL HURRY" Lexi picked out what she should wear,Lexi went to at eat,"Bye mom i love you" Love u to Lexi" lexi was at the bus stop minding her own bussins... "hey you" "who me?" "yes you" "what do you want" then Lexi was tooken bye the strange man.
3 DAYS LATER
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU CANT FIND HER" "sorry miss we cant find her"
"BUT YOU HAVE TO I AM HER MOM AND I MISS HER DEEPLY" Miss we will do ever thing we can do to find her" " i will call some of her friends".
"hello?" "hi it lexi mom" oh hi Miss.Sindy how are you" "not so good" "why?" "have you seen lexi any were?" "no why?" BEACUSE SHES MISSING" "*crys* really'' ''yes i was looking ever where for her"
12 DAYS LATER
'' WERE AM I'' said lexi "SUSH" WHO R U????'' said lexi ''I am Unknow u dont need to know'' I really wanna know'' Fine my names zach'' ZACH LET ME GO"ok'' really!'' yes but u have to do something for me'' what?'' well you must anwer this riddle'' ok what is it'' Lexi knew she was not going to get this because she was really bad at riddle ''ok what stronger than god and eviler than the deivel..poor people have it rich people need it...''
''umm i know this'' lexi thought really hard.. she remberd the teacher said that nothing is stonger than good and she remberd that poor people have nothing ... "I KNOW IT ITS NOTHING'' you got it?'' YES I DID KNOW LET ME GO ZACH'' fine go" that day lexi was so happy that she could see her famliy
3 DAYS LATER!!
lexi walked more like ran to the police, "HI my names lexi and ever one look for me'' ok whats your phone number'' 244521614676775'' the word i am going home jiggled anound her head like pudding "ok lexi i will call your parents'' Miss. Sindy pick up whit a really sad voice ''hello'' Hello this is the police'' Really what happend'' Miss.Sindys tummy droped like a rolleroster '' We found you girl'' Miss . sindy jumped and holled like a dog ...
3 HOURS LATER
"MOM I AM HOME AT LAST'' lexi ran over to her mom and huged her soo hard ''HONEY I MISSED YOU SO MUCH''
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Cosmosxx
Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 1228
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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Wrong board. |
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linksage
Joined: 19 Sep 2008 Posts: 112
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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? -confused- |
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Cosmosxx
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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linksage wrote: | ? -confused- |
Lol, right there with ya Linksage...... |
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~~rose~~
Joined: 18 Jun 2009 Posts: 726
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:40 pm Post subject: |
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Umm, shouldn't this be in the story column? Also, you haven't taken an exam in a long time! Why do you only have one animal? I can really help you out in that area, little red can too if you want. I already talked to her about it. |
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Chloe Taylor
Joined: 08 Apr 2009 Posts: 6693
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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Srry chica. Their right. You have to move this to the story section |
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Amandaaa
Joined: 01 Oct 2009 Posts: 20
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:00 pm Post subject: |
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oh ok sorry i am new :[ |
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Chloe Taylor
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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~~rose~~ wrote: | Umm, shouldn't this be in the story column? Also, you haven't taken an exam in a long time! Why do you only have one animal? I can really help you out in that area, little red can too if you want. I already talked to her about it. |
it's ok rose. She's with me. I'm sure I can get her plenty situated. But thanks anyways! We'll keep you in mind! |
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~~rose~~
Joined: 18 Jun 2009 Posts: 726
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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Chloe Taylor wrote: | ~~rose~~ wrote: | Umm, shouldn't this be in the story column? Also, you haven't taken an exam in a long time! Why do you only have one animal? I can really help you out in that area, little red can too if you want. I already talked to her about it. |
it's ok rose. She's with me. I'm sure I can get her plenty situated. But thanks anyways! We'll keep you in mind! |
Oh, okay, if you don't have something that she really likes, or anything, you can always pm me, and if I'm not on for a while, pm little red, she'll get the message to me. |
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Chloe Taylor
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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no probs! |
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milon
Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 3649
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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Somehow I thought your story would be more um...engaging and depressing than that. I mean, I guess it was good just not enough suspence or something..... |
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Chloe Taylor
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:19 pm Post subject: |
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Yea, well, I know her well and I also know she's not the brightest crayon in the crayon box She's new here, give her a little time. I'll help her get used to all the smart talk we use on here. |
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Cosmosxx
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:35 pm Post subject: |
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Chloe Taylor wrote: | Yea, well, I know her well and I also know she's not the brightest crayon in the crayon box |
I can't believe you just said that.
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~~rose~~
Joined: 18 Jun 2009 Posts: 726
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:38 pm Post subject: |
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haha, that's soo mean! Haha, you must be really good friends. |
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Chloe Taylor
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:01 pm Post subject: |
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yup. Since kindergarten! don't worry, we say that kind of stuff to each other all the time. lol! |
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