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sandtiger
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 Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:10 pm Post subject: Criticue for Pixel art? |
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I'm not really sure even what is IS, I think its a computer type pixel drawing, just a bit clearer then your average pixel. Its supposed to be a kind of goose or duck, mainly goose, my color choice doesn't seem to fit with me but oh well. Overall, I should Improve in lighting, detail, anatomy and other things. But, what do you think? comments good ad bad ok, Feedback is greatly appreciated!
Well there it is!
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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| Wow Sand thats great!Better then I could ever do! |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:12 pm Post subject: |
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| Well still, I could of at least outlined it with black or something.... |
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wolfgirl159357
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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| i think its fabulous!!!!!! |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks... |
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Angelicious
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:38 pm Post subject: |
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Based on the current color, I'd say it looks more like a female duck than a goose, though the anatomy is kind of in between the two. Swans have orange or yellow beaks, not ducks or geese. Their eyes aren't like ours; they usually have beady black eyes, not pupils. Your lines in the wings are quite good, but the different layers of feathers serve different purposes, and are usually different colors. See the reference below.
[a possible reference]
What program do you use? |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:40 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh! Thanks you so much and I use RealWorldPaint.com |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 6:41 am Post subject: |
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| I put a second one up, Its looks slightly better, theirs is a second wing. There is also different colored feathers for it and a better tail and leg. I outlined the wing a little. Through I could do a lot better... Check it o ut! It looks more like a swan or something... |
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:27 am Post subject: |
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| No offense Sand but I like this one better then the other it's realy goood. |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:31 am Post subject: |
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| Non taken, I do too personally! |
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:32 am Post subject: |
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| Haha it does look really good! |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:32 am Post subject: |
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| Through it still has its quirks! |
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:34 am Post subject: |
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| but it does look much better then the 1st for the feet they look a litle diffrent lol |
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sandtiger
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:37 am Post subject: |
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Yup! Plus i noticed it is A LOT better with TWO wings, not one, how can you fly with one wing!  |
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shaggydoggy
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| Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:44 am Post subject: |
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| Rofl! |
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