One last Criticue!

[sandtiger]

I tried to do a styled background here, with a flying eagle and I think I messed up the text BIG time! Its silver, and now that I look at it, It should by like a blue or or something, well in my opinion. the manip itself was a little rushed, I think its kinda noticeable, also must improve on blending the text in with shadow... But anyway, here it is! what do you think!







I did use a Flickr Photo for the eagle, so here is the source I believe!


Source: http://www.flickr.com/photos/ozjulian/2594181787/in/set-72057594048470618/

[Cowgirls Rule]

Very good! I love the pose, I think maybe if you had created a shadow over the text or edited with the lighting it would be perfecct. I love the text, it looks like clouds.

[sandtiger]

Thanks! your perfectly right on the shadow or lighting on the text, I was going for flowy and free, and Thank you for your comment!

[Cowgirls Rule]

Maybe, if you included like an extra animal in there, it would be more interesting. Just a suggestion though, mayble like a snake.

[sandtiger]

I did that with one manip, through the text was Very Weird...

[Cowgirls Rule]

Hm.

[Ferox]

Things I notice:

- The cutting in the front of hte wing looks rough. This should be smooth.
- The beak looks soft, which is shouldn't. You could hide this by moving the eagle down so that the beak is in front of the clouds, hiding the outline. Other than that it's very good cutting.

With the text, what options do you have in your program? Can you put a very thin black line around it? A glow behind it? Unfortunately I don't have pictures to show you what I mean.

[Elf]

I like it a lot...i think what ferox has pointed out would benefit the manip also the tree on top of the rock in the left hand corner is fuzzy where it meets the clouds if that could be sorted as well then i think it would be near enough perfect.

[shaggydoggy]

I think evyerone pointed out all the noticable things other then that it looks great!