Critucue on New Manip! *Please look, Second up!*

[sandtiger]

Well I have recently learned how to make my text slightly fancier and how to mix objects from certain pictures, I will post a manip that uses both tommorow, but for now here is one that uses the fancy like text, Critucue please!



Here:





Note:The Horses front hooves were cut off in the original pic. Sorry about that, this is mainly fancy text.


Here is the Second one, It uses objects from different photos and fancy text, I tried to pick A color that went with it... the rock the crane is standing on is from a different photo then the crane, that's where the mixing comes. the text is kind of obvious, is the color correct for this one?
Please Criticue!





what do you think?

[shaggydoggy]

There are awsome!

[Chloe Taylor]

Critique: I think you could have done a better job with hiding the foal's hooves in the grass, but nice work o the text!

Other: Awsome! Great job!

[Angelicious]

Text: The color choice should match the picture more. I would make it match the blue of the flowers, in this case.

The manip: The horse looks very small. Either crop the bottom of the grass, or skew the horse so he's bigger. The better the aspect ratio, the more realistic it will look. Hooves can easily be redrawn on any program. I don't know what program you use, but (I would STRONGLY suggest downloading GIMP if you don't have it - it's free. From there, make a new layer, place it under the horse's layer, use the heal tool on one of the back hooves and draw the front hooves on the new layer, smudge and blend as needed, then merge the layers.) Other than that, the cutting was done really well! I would also suggest covering up the horse's legs with grass - you might not even need to remake the hooves if you do that, and the horse will look a lot more like he's "in" the picture.

[sandtiger]

Thank you everyone, I'll use those tips in the future! the second one is up, what do you think? I mixed Objects from different objects And fancy texts that I tried to make fit. What do you think?

[shaggydoggy]

Sand it looks great!

[sandtiger]

Oh no, I'm still a beginner and armature, but Thank you, Which one do you like better?

[shaggydoggy]

The wetlands one.

[sandtiger]

Thank you!

[Ferox]

The second one looks better, but wit the text can you see how it looks really sharp and artificial against the background? Can you add a shadow behind your text to let it merge a little?

[sandtiger]

I'll try that, Thanks!