Contest Closed!!! Winners Inside!

Little Red · Joined: 28 Jun 2009 Posts: 582

Hmm, what's a poem I can write...I KNOW!!!

Love (again lol):
We held hands,
And came together...close,
We looked at each other,
And said who we loved most,
He said me,
and I said him,
He turned the key,
to his truck,
and left for the lake
We rolled in the sun,
until we had to make,
for my home,
he said goodnight,
as he hopped into his truck,
I waved until he was out of sight.
...I was in love.

(I think that that's a good ending, so I'm not going to keep going)

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Good! Alright!

Lil*Angel · Joined: 03 Dec 2006 Posts: 484

Username: Lil*Angel
Poem is baout: Probably about another life one..
Why you are entering the contest: For Fun
Are you willing to pay money: oO i have to?

What we long for is not the simple matter of morality
What we long for is not the humble man drinking a bottle of straight whiskey in the bar
What we long for is patient,
A flicker of light,
At the sight of the clock
Given it's name
Planted his feet, inhaled
Oxygen, at the sight of living
At the peak of going threw hell,
What we long for is not fair, however seemly complex at the root of it's beginning.
I think, yes I think i want to become rebellioius and run away
And start a new life with you till the day I die
I ask you if it would be forever
You reply stating with "nothing is forever" which out sought thought of the truth.
what we long for is what percentage of compassion we still have to be nestled and hate to get us threw the night.
We we long for is nothing short of superior.
What we long for is for the children.
What we long for is is be freed from our residence.
To once again bare our skin for the sake
Of our sins.

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

ok!!!

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

4 days you guys! Only 3 people re-entered poems!!!!

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

3 DAYS!!! Oopsss! Caps was on lol Embarassed

But really 3 days to get poems in! Let others know about it if they havented entered!

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Username: Marlee
Poem is about: Brothers
Why you are entering the contest: For fun
Are you willing to pay money: No
This is a poem I got names are of people i do not know
Brothers
When I awake from a good nights rest
I can guess
Who will wake me up.
Levi, Jumping on my bed,
Making his face all red.
I see from the corner of my eye
Travis, wearing dad's tie.
I yell for mom,
Who gets them off,
And shoo's them off to breakfast.

This is my best

I want to dedicate this poem to my Best friend in the world and her to litttle brothers who always wake us up in the morning. And to her Mom who is like a second mom and her Dad who treats me just like one of his own.

Little Red · Joined: 28 Jun 2009 Posts: 582

marlee, you entered too late, you aren't one of the competeters.

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Sorry, this is part 2 though. Only selected people from the last part were able to enter.

Marlee · Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 5592

Oh sorry

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

OK. Tomorrow is he day!!!! Tomorrow!!

traca · Joined: 11 Aug 2009 Posts: 5

Heather · Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 5915

Ok thanks! Tomorrow is the day! Check back here! Pm's will go out tomorrow!

SisKate · Joined: 25 Sep 2007 Posts: 1837

SisKate · Joined: 25 Sep 2007 Posts: 1837

If so, here it goes.

Username: SisKate
Poem is about: Losing My Best Friend (my horse Scout, who I lost just three days ago to Colic Crying or Very sad

)
Why you are entering the contest: For Scout and for fun
Are you willing to pay money: What for...?

"Bad Dream"

As we pull up
We stop the truck
I can't believe we're here.

I cannot breathe
It's hard to see
My eyes are full of tears.

The middle field
Has an empty feel
It's sad when you're not near.

Let's all be strong
He's where he belongs
The hurt is like a spear.

You were only just seven
Now you're up there in heaven
I can't believe we're here.

For Scout. Rest In Peace.

SisKate