Contest Closed!!! Winners Inside!

[Heather]

Okay, You people have seen my poems but I want to see yours!
So here it is:

Obliviously, I'm gonna have a little contest! First things first, rules! I know we hate 'em but I got a couple rules. I'm not a big fan on them either! lol

Rules:
1) Can't be too long. I'll say it can't be more than 40 lines.
2) Can be about absoulutely anything!
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Okay that's all told you I wasn't big on rules!
Next, entering. Here's what your enter application should look like(using myself as examle):

Username: Heather
Poem is about: Love
Why you are entering the contest: For fun
Are you willing to pay money: No
(P.S. If you said "No" I don't really care I'm not charging I just wanna see what you guys would say lol)

Then I'd tell you whether or not your in which you'll most likley all be in so yeah....
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Next portion is: Deadlines!

Deadline for poems, Part 1 and applications: August 27th
Deadline for Poems, Part 2: September 1st (TODAY!!)
Deadline for Poems, Part 3: September 4th
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As you see, this contest consists of 3 parts. Part 1 is everyone. The next part is 4-7 people and the last part is 3 people competing for first, second and third.
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Lastly, the fun part! Prizes!

1st: A Jack Russel Terrier Link: http://www.sandboxfarm.com/viewanimal.php?idkey=922773
2nd: A certain amount of money from the area of $200,000 and $300,000 (Sorry not the richest person here! )
3rd: $100,000(once again, not that rich....)
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So you can message me your applications or post them here! Have fun guys!

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The final descision is September 5th, 2009


Competers:
Andi Mioux
Cowgirls Rule
Lil*Angel
traca
Little Red
SisKate

Part two competers:
1. Lil*Angel
2. Cowgirls Rule
3. Little Red
4. SisKate
5.traca


Part three Competers:
1. Cowgirls Rule
2. Little Red
3. SisKate


Winners:

First Place: Cowgirls Rule
Second Place: Little Red
Third Place: SisKate

[Andi Mioux]

Username: Andi Mioux
Poem is About: Life in general xD
Why you are entering the contest: Fun :]
Are you willing to pay money: No...haha

I have it already, so I'll just post it now?

Lessons Learned
This past of mine keeps knocking at my door
I cry out, but it just knock-knocks away
My mind shuts down, I cannot feel anymore
Let me think, let me pray, let me now say
This is wrong, the hurting I’m receiving
Relate with you I feel no more can I
You used me and now my heart’s left bleeding
My trust left to gain for all you spoke were lies
Now I’ve told of what you’ve done, I must go
To fix these wounds you forced upon me then
My heart to heal, but scars left aching so
The lessons you’ve taught not lost in the end
Never will I forget what we were here
But fond is not the memory, my dear

[Heather]

Okay! Thank you for your entery! I'll get back to you August 30th!

[Cowgirls Rule]

Username: Cowgirls Rule
Poem is about: Uh...um..I'll figure it out soon enough. Sorry
Why you are entering the contest: For experience and fun
Are you willing to pay money: maybe

[Cowgirls Rule]

Okay so here it is:
It's about the freedom of riding on the beach on a horse.

Forever Free

We shall run along the shore
Wind whipping our manes
The salty sea lapping up against our legs
A rider atop our backs
Sand showering onlookers
Our hooves make a beat
Boom boom
Our hearts skip a beat
Our tails stream from out behind us
The water soothes us like a warm blanket

[Heather]

Arighty! Thank you for your entery! And I'll get back to you for the next portion!

[Lil*Angel]

Username: Lil*Angel
Poem is about: Uhm..basically like life
Why you are entering the contest: For fun
Are you willing to pay money: No

Voice of the Dead
I am the voice of the dead;
Life's not what i want it to be,
Can someone help me get out please?
This is so confusing, but it will come,
When I found out who's the one.
It's not you, you, you or you,
So just forget it, I want everything to be true.

I am the voice of the dead;
Don't come by or near me,
I can't control who I want to be,
It's such a dangerous thing.
I don't want you to get hurt as much as it stings.
It hurts too much to think about it,
So go on and get your kit,
To put me out of my misery,
But be careful, I am slippery

I am the voice of the dead;
It is almost my time to go,
So until then, just remember me as Zero,
When i leave, you won't remember me,
So just let me be.
These are my final words goodbye,
The next time you see me, I will be a butterfly.

I couldnt find a word for the very last word (butterfly) to rhyme with goodbye sooo yea...hehe hope it helps

[traca]

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[Heather]

Lil* Angel, your in! but traca your poem is more than thirty lines! Sorry I guess I can bump the number to thirty five but next time please look for that.

[traca]

no sorry... ill make it shorter...... i forgot
ok now it's thirty! sorry!

[Heather]

No problem!

[Heather]

2 days for applications! 2 days!

[Lil*Angel]

Kk thanks heather! And i have a question...Can we enter two poems or just one?

[Heather]

One please! (Moving the date up to August 31st) 9 Days! 9 Days!

[Little Red]

Username: Little Red
Poem is about: Heartbreak
Why you are entering the contest: just want to
Are you willing to pay money: ...maybe lol


Heartbreak (I stink at names)

So far our love
Had flourished so,
It had gone above,
and beyond it would go,
You said goodbye,
and I said okay,
Inside I would cry,
hoping you wouldn't stay,
to see me crying,
wounded in a way,
my heart was broken,
and that was the day,
I thought of what you said,
"through thick and thin".

Okay, that's the end. (I can't think of any more) are we allowed to make 2 or so?