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Cowgirls Rule
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Wow! Thanks! Here's more:
Cumalon padded outside to bask in the awe of his pack. He gave his fur a quick lick and strutted onto the "Royal Ledge". His packmates oohed and awed over his new shiney fur.His normal sage green eyes were emerald and stood out like a sore thumb. The wind was at his back, making his ears flap like sails.
"It has to be in here somewhere," Hantle yipped.
She was inside of Cumalon's den, searching for evidence to prove that Cumalon had killed Trentan. She was specificly looking for tufts of fur and torn flesh, but couldn't find any. She had been searching for quite some time when she heard scuffling and talking outside. She quickly went back to her hiding spot so that no one could find her. |
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Chloe Taylor
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| Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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Lil*Angel
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| Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:37 am Post subject: |
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| your good! keep writing |
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Little Red
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| Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:10 pm Post subject: |
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Keep going! You're amazing at writing!  |
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Cowgirls Rule
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| Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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Cowgirls Rule
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| Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:43 am Post subject: |
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| Sorry, there won't be much of a story soon, because I'm hurt. |
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Lil*Angel
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| Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:12 pm Post subject: |
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| =O what happened!!!! |
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Cowgirls Rule
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| Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:20 pm Post subject: |
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| I got bit by a horse really bad. It's on the what's going on with you and your pets topic. |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Okay. I finally don't have to ice my arm. Here's a little bit more:
Hantle's eyes filled with sorrow when she realized that Trenton wouldn't ever be by her side again. He wouldn't be there to comfort her in times of sorrow and happiness. She suddenly slipped into depression, her world black and white.
Cumlon didn't feel the least bit regretfull about what he did, until he realized that his parents had Trenton for a reason. He realized that Trenton wouldn't be there to annoy him. Perhaps he had taken it a step too far.
(Sorry about this part. I was listening to a really good song. It was also depressing...) |
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