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| Am I good at poetry?(When you do this poll, DO NOT think your hurting my feelings by picking one of the bad choices. I want your HONEST opinions!) |
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| Yeah, you are good! |
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lorraine
Joined: 01 May 2007
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| I would say the Love one is the best the rest I can't seem to find the flow a poem needs but that is my opinion so you don't have to listen if you don't want to |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
Posts: 5915
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| Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:13 pm Post subject: |
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Cheyann
Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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| Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:16 pm Post subject: |
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I love them! They are awesome.  |
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Lil*Angel
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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| Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:32 am Post subject: |
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You are really good! They are awesome!! I posted a poem up a while ago but no one replied to it.  But hopefully soon someone will! =D |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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| I'll check it out and thanx |
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Lil*Angel
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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| Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 12:01 pm Post subject: |
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| no problem and i posted some more so feel free to check them out! and i hope you will be posting more of your poems soon too! |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:51 pm Post subject: |
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Here's a new poem: It's called When the Sun Rises
When the sun rises, it awakes you in your sleep.
You won't be late to work or to go feed the sheep.
You can't miss the bus or go out to the pool.
You won't be late for anything and won't look like a fool.
I know horrible right? |
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Cheyann
Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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| Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:51 pm Post subject: |
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Lil*Angel
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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| Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:08 pm Post subject: |
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no heather! its actually pretty good!  |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:22 am Post subject: |
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| thanx |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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Enjoy those poems. I'll have more soon!
Next Poem date: Monday(hopefully, I'll let you know since I've been searching for my poem books...  ) |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:48 am Post subject: |
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I'm still looking for my poem book. Once I find it I'll get back to you. Sorry for the delay!  |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:32 pm Post subject: |
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| If you like my poems, check out my contest! |
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Heather
Joined: 28 Nov 2006
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| Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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I found one poem I said I'd share so here is "Diamond."
Diamond
Diamond, a shiny, little dog.
In her mouth a toy hedgehog.
Breathing fast, holding on tight.
What an amazing, pretty sight.
We got her at my Mom's friend's house.
She pranced at us like an over-sized mouse.
Her ears stood up at the sound of my voice.
She made a perky, little noise.
We needed a name for that little girl.
My mind went rapid with such a big whirl.
"Diamond!" My sister thought out of the blue.
It was the greatest name right after Stue!
We had a name for our dog,
In her mouth a toy hedgehog! |
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Lil*Angel
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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| Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 8:36 pm Post subject: |
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| Thats good too! And is it true? If it is, how did she come up with Diamond? |
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