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Neko's Story, Told by a Chipmunk part 2

 
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Sverige



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 6:43 pm    Post subject: Neko's Story, Told by a Chipmunk part 2 Reply with quote

They started to prowl to Neko so that they could tear him open and eat him. He started to run and they chased him. Soon, to soon for me to appricate, they cornerd him in the corner of the mountain. He was cowaring in the corner like a leaf. Then something seemed to tell him that he was about to die and he coldn't for his 10 year old friend, hes adult owner and 3 year old kit. It seemed like something clicked in his brain and he rememberd that he had teeth and claws. Now I will tell you this next scean in slow motion, so his Seal Lynx Point fur slowly raise like the arch on a Halloween black cat's back. The teeth that no one whould of known that they where as pointy as a knife, whic they are slowly sprang out of his mouth. His claws, that he had hide when he went to the claw clipping vet, slowly pushed out of his paws. A rumble was being out of his throught to spring into the biggest hiss and the loudest that probl the mountain lions whould of heard. Fleud's, Luna's, and Ball Faire Reboundir's tails shot between there legs as they lied on the ground and whimpered, lmost yellped. Masculin whimpered slightly, then he laught and said "You have sponk Little Seal Lynx. How 'Bout we call a treety? When you need help in a tight space you could make your battle cry and we'll be there faster then you could shake your tail to fight by your side." He said in alittle bit of a france accsent.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

your writting rocks!
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