Wild Horse Story

[3_9_3]

A herd of wild horses made dust and made loud noises. The hooves of the horses forced themselves to go forward.
The leader of the herd is a small gray horse with a white muzzle. His name is Omen.
The slowest horse is a pure white mare: The only color like that. her name is Sparkle. But she has a reason to be going slow. She was pregnant with the most beautiful foal ever.
Days go by. The mare gets slower, but the herd moves on. The herd stops in a very beautiful green field. The mare lays down and waits. An hour later, there is a beautiful filly suckling.
There is a commotion with the herd. Omen is in front to see his daughter. The horses gather around the mare and her beautiful daughter which has just got the name; Julia.



If you would like me to continue this story, I will. Comment or answer the question to let me know.

[Cecelia]

It would be nice if you added more detail but its going well so far.

I love the names

[3_9_3]

thank you, i will continue. =)