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Knight
Joined: 08 Aug 2008 Posts: 70
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:25 pm Post subject: Children of the Night |
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Just a poem i wrote the other day....hope u people approve.
Night calls softly
To those who listen
Wings in the moonlight
Brightly glisten
Stars blink slowly
At the earth below
While the wind in the trees
Begins to blow
Silence is not golden
Like the sun
That shines uncaringly
When the day has begun
Silence is black
Like darkness, caressing
Why the night is so beautiful
I can't begin guessing
So follow me brothers
And sisters true
Let us dance once again
Once the day is through
Let us soar
Through skies of black
On wings silver and blue
The night is inviting
So come, listen
To the sound of wings
That sparkle and glisten
Let us rejoice!
With voices raised
And join the Children of the Night
The strong, the brave
Then wake in the morning
Wondering if it was a dream
Remember that things
Are not as they seem
Endure the day
Endure the light
For waiting for you
Is the night
Night comes softly
To those who listen
Wings in the moonlight
Brightly glisten... |
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ChocolateGal
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 1868
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 4:14 am Post subject: |
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Wow, that is brilliant! |
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Knight
Joined: 08 Aug 2008 Posts: 70
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 7:29 pm Post subject: |
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thanks! |
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Dancing Water
Joined: 08 Oct 2008 Posts: 8
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Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:42 pm Post subject: |
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I love it! I knew u were good but I didn't know u were that good! |
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Knight
Joined: 08 Aug 2008 Posts: 70
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 7:51 pm Post subject: |
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gosh, your making me blush.... |
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Cecelia
Joined: 16 Dec 2006 Posts: 1487
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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That's really good! Keep on writing! |
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Knight
Joined: 08 Aug 2008 Posts: 70
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:10 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks! And believe me, I'll be writing so much you'll get sick of me before long! |
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