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Lissie
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 Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 1:08 pm Post subject: Please delete,mods! |
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Please Delete this, thanks!
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Lissie
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| Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 1:18 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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Lissie
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| Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 2:05 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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Lissie
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| Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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Lissie
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 11:26 am Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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Lissie
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:36 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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Lissie
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 1:32 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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~!pink-bubbles!~
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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If you improve the vocabulary in every chapter it would make it sound more interesting to the readers.  |
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Lissie
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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History Lover
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 3:49 pm Post subject: |
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That post was great. Maybe if you make the post a little longer, it would be more interesting. But it's interesting right now!  |
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Lissie
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 3:56 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks! Im gonna write more soon |
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Charlie1
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:10 pm Post subject: |
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| I agree. Put more description into your words and maybe put it into paragraph form? Just suggests. So far good going |
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Lissie
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks so much gguys! Im posting chapter 9 in a minute! |
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Charlie1
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:51 pm Post subject: |
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| KK. Can't wait. =) |
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Lissie
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore this post.....
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