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fire22923
Joined: 03 Jan 2008 Posts: 21
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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:11 pm Post subject: I'm Free (Sure to bring tears to your eyes) |
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I’m Free
Don’t grieve for me, for now I’m free
I’m following the path
God has laid you see.
I took his hand when I heard His call
I turned my back and left it all.
I could not stay another day
To laugh, to love, to work, or play
Tasks left undone must stay that way
I found the peace at the close of day.
If my parting has left a void
Then fill it with remembered joys-
I friendship shared, a laugh, a kiss
Oh yes, these things I will too miss.
Be not burdened with times of sorrow.
I wish you the sunshine of tomorrow.
My life’s been full, I savored much.
Good friends, good times, a loved one’s touch.
Perhaps my time seemed all too brief-
Don’t lengthen it now with undue grief.
Lift up your hearts, and to thee-
God wanted me now, He set me free. |
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Leopardstorm
Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 4326
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Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 11:50 pm Post subject: |
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beautiful |
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PinkStar
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 889
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:19 am Post subject: |
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it was pretty good! |
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madeforyouperfectly
Joined: 20 Sep 2007 Posts: 54
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 3:04 pm Post subject: |
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Really Good! |
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Lissie
Joined: 13 Aug 2008 Posts: 110
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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That was great...a very good poem |
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lorraine
Joined: 01 May 2007 Posts: 532
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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that poem was awesome |
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