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Jinxx
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 1906
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 10:55 pm Post subject: Life Has Come Full Circle |
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Written many, many years ago. I graduated high school over twenty years ago, this was written while I was in school.
LIFE HAS COME FULL CIRCLE
Out under the sun he stands
His noble subjects before him
The picture of perfection
He has triumphed all
And lost nothing
He has lived only to be king
That is what is meant for a creature as he
Born to an uncertain world
It was a struggle at every turn
Attempting to stand on wobbly legs
Through his first winter
To a life of loneliness
He sighs at life
Before him lies his past, present and future
What came next
He had reached his goal
He had defeated all odds
Surveying his kingdom
His muscles tremble
His ears twitch
His eyes search
New life has entered this world
As uncertain as his--
First try at wobbly legs
Life Has Come Full Circle
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Silversketches
Joined: 05 Dec 2006 Posts: 2270
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 1:07 pm Post subject: |
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I love it!
Is it about a horse? |
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Jinxx
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 1906
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 3:39 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, it's about a horse.
Glad you like it. |
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Cowgirls Rule
Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:38 pm Post subject: |
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Wow Jinxx! I love it! |
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PinkStar
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 889
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry my eyes were stuck to the screen,,
I never knew you had it in you Jinxx |
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milon
Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 3649
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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Lovely :3 |
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Jinxx
Joined: 28 Nov 2006 Posts: 1906
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 10:09 pm Post subject: |
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lol Pinkstar, when I was in school I was forever drawing and writing poetry. I wrote it so much my english teacher had me hand in 1 or 2 a week in place of the journal he made everyone else do each week. It was mostly about horses back then though as I lived for horses at the time. I don't know what I have left after my last move, there's a lot of things I haven't found yet. This one I happened to have had on my old website and I hadn't taken it down yet because I haven't moved it to the new site yet. Thought I'd post it here for others to enjoy. It's my favorite of the ones I've written.
It's written in honor of a very special horse. A horse I didn't realize until more recently is something more than I thought he was back then.
**Race the wind my friend and carry my hopes and dreams with you for you are my inspiration** |
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PinkStar
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 889
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 2:13 pm Post subject: |
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i understand.. I slacked off and wrote and drew in class to.. I guess that did not really pay off becasue My teacher always yelled at me.. but i write good stories! And Draw well |
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Jinxx
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 9:18 pm Post subject: |
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PinkStar wrote: | i understand.. I slacked off and wrote and drew in class to.. I guess that did not really pay off becasue My teacher always yelled at me.. but i write good stories! And Draw well |
lol..I didn't slack off. I just couldn't touch a school book or I'd fail exams (well, maybe not fail but didn't keep my average up if I did). I had to listen in class so drawing and writing were left to outside of classes. But I'd often take things in for one teacher to look at (my 8th? grade english teacher). He's the one that eventually had me do poems instead of the journal he made everyone else write for class. |
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PinkStar
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 889
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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haha niice.. So we know mothers day is coming up? I made my mom a looovley picture frame wit ha little poem. It is totaly not my best but yeah...
Mother, your not just another
Your better the other
Wherever I am
I see you there
Your in my presence, your in the air
As time unravels,
we always travel
So three cheers for mom
For she is truly the bomb...
Yeah really awkard but.. We travel like at least once a month LOL!!
I really write good stories... I could post one up somewhere soon |
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PinkStar
Joined: 23 Nov 2007 Posts: 889
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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We really have a lot in common dont we Jinxx? |
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