Zakura's Story ( The hardships of a wolf )( coming soon)

Pingyang · Joined: 13 Feb 2008 Posts: 6

Coming soon!Long story but will be finished soon! Message me if you are interested or put up a post!If you become my friend you will get a sneak peak! Cool

Pingyang · Joined: 13 Feb 2008 Posts: 6

anyone interested?

Biba · Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 4

i am interested... Very Happy

Knight · Joined: 08 Aug 2008 Posts: 70

I'm kinda interested....I love wolves....I'll be waiting for your story

Pingyang · Joined: 13 Feb 2008 Posts: 6

narators or wolf point of veiw

Knight · Joined: 08 Aug 2008 Posts: 70

I don't know....either would be interesting....Whatever you think you're best at. Wink

Pingyang · Joined: 13 Feb 2008 Posts: 6

Well I will write the intro to both... and this is my second story...the first is being worked on... Embarassed

Pads scraping on the pavement, dull claws clattering. I am running, running from man. I am now cornered, stuck between gate and man. I only have two choices. Either let man cage me, take me away forever, never to see the forest again. Or I can protect myself and run, run to me pack, my mate and my cave. Home, where I lead the hunt for the food that will nourish my pack and pups. Home, where I will be safe, where we will huddle together at night and play during the day. The forest is my home and it is now being dominated by man. I came in search of more food because supplies are running low. I must hurry, I must choose between pack or man. I came far and can't give up now, not yet. I don't deserve this, becoming caged for life. But what to do now? How to choose? My mate and pups are starving, my pack is growing weak. What will happen to them if I don't return? Am I really going to return? I make the leap, now man is cornered by me. I must go, flee, run. I must escape this place, this place with strange blocks of wood taken from our forest and used for man to live in. This huge place were food is plenty. Why does man have so much and us so little? Why do they need more? This place full of scents makes me stay. I will search for food. I won't give up, I will succeed, complete my goal. I will bring food back to my home, I will feed my pack, I will help my kind survive, I will do all of these things and much more before I give up. I will be the leader of all feral dogs of my breed. I will prove to everybody that I am the best.
Finally, I am back in the forest. The pine needles are soft below my paws, the dew and puddles sooth my raws pads. As soon as I found food I left mans area. I can now smell my packs territory marks. They are stale but I am almost home. I jump the familiar moss-covered log and I trot into the cave to find my mate, six pups and ten pack members all alive and waiting...

I have 46 pages in this version so far but I will type it up later...Tell me how it is , Ideas on what to change are okay. also tell me if you want to here the narators point of veiw and the first story intro. THank you!!!