The Secret Land of Mahal ( a series)

[Cecelia]

I am going to make this up as I go along so bear with me

The lovely little finch Wahsda looked out of the window.Why was she here in somebody's living room when she could be flying free in the island of Mahal.Wahsda's mother Flora had told her about the enchanting land of Mahal ever since Wahsda had hatched from her egg.Mahal was a glorious land full of berries and streams. It was a place where there were few humans and many animals that lived peacefully with each other.There were very tall trees that many birds lived in. Squirrels lived there too and Macintosh was the Mayor. He was a very handsome squirrel that all of the lady squirrels swooned over. He always made the right choices as the Mayor of Mahal and always gave away free peanuts that he grew in the garden of Mahal.Oh how Wahsda dreamed of traveling there someday. That was where her mother Flora was right now. She had escaped as soon as Wahsda and her sister Gabriella could live without her. Wahsda woke up her sister Gabriella with a nudge of her wing. "What do you want?" the sleepy Gabriella chirped. " Come on Gabby we are going to Mahal to find our mother!" Wahsda said. So off they went on their long journey to the island of Mahal.

I will write more when somebody posts. I hope you like it!

[Cecelia]

As they flew out of the window,Wahsda felt small doubts creep into her mind. What am I thinking? Where is Mahal and was mother telling the truth? Then she felt guilty for thinking like that. Her mother would never lie to her. Never! They flew through trees tall and small. " I'm hungry Wahsda. Where do we eat at?" Gabriella chirped. Wahsda's eyes scanned the trees looking for a restaurant. "There's one!" she cried. The two finches flew up to the large birdhouse. " Hello darlings, how may I help you? You hungry?" a large cat named Gus meowed. " Gabby fly away!" Wahsda ordered. " NO I'm hungry!" Gabby chirped.Wahsda knew they were in great danger. But her sister wouldn't listen. Reluctantly she flew away, leaving her sister at her doom.

[Fiddle]

it's pretty good =]
I'll keep reading ^^

[Cecelia]

Thanks Fiddle! I thought it wasn't very good.
I'll post more soon, Can't write now.

[Cecelia]

its due time I posted some more.

Wahsda watched while a sense of dread engulfed her. This could not be happening but she couldn't stop it from happening either. The cat looked both directions and lunged at Gabriella. " Help us!" Wahsda chirped with all her might. That is when the most amazing thing happened! All of a suydden crows,robins,cardinals,songbirds,blackbirds,bluebirds,blue jays, every type of bird imaginable flew after the cat. Gus jumped back in astonishment and ran away leaving Gabriella lying on the ground. One of the bluebirds stayed with them and sang " My name is Nana and there is only one cure for catscratch! You must go to the island of Mahal and find the amberry it is the only antidote." at that Nana flew away. Wahsa looked around and began to feel nervous. What was she to do where was she to go?

The island of Mahal sudenly felt much more precious.