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Chilly Girl
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 Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 12:25 am Post subject: Critique, please [dragon] |
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I just finished up this dragon for odinsdottir's contest. I have to say, this is pretty good, considering my usual work. I know I haven't got the shading thing, but I am still working on that. So, CRITIQUE, PLEASE! 
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Chilly Girl
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:13 am Post subject: |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:29 am Post subject: |
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Could use a little work, but very good, Better then some people here  |
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Chilly Girl
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks, PinkStar, anything exact on what needs a little work? |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 2:44 pm Post subject: Re: Critique, please [dragon] |
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| Chilly Girl wrote: | I just finished up this dragon for odinsdottir's contest. I have to say, this is pretty good, considering my usual work. I know I haven't got the shading thing, but I am still working on that. So, CRITIQUE, PLEASE!
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yepers! See the leg in front? it has like toes, then the other two are just flat. The white strip in the back, is it a sword?? Sorry if its not..And also The colors should be darker If these hurt your feelings i am sorry just helping out |
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Chilly Girl
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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nope, no feeling hurt. I know what you mean by the other two being flat, but the farthest one back is curled under and the one on the ground has a lot of pressure on it. I tried to show that.
The thing in the back is not a sword. It was supposed to be the shadow of the other wing. Maybe I should have made that darker?
Thanks for comments! |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 2:54 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh!! Now that i know i see it, and the color of the dragon should be more olive green or tree green |
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Chilly Girl
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:12 pm Post subject: |
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*shakes head*
The entire reason I love and enjoy drawing fantasy creatures is that no one truly knows how they look.  |
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PinkStar
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:16 pm Post subject: |
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Oh well,, Thats just my opinion, i would show you wha ti mean by darker but I dont know how to put photos on here  |
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MCM_Raine
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:12 pm Post subject: |
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| Chilly Girl wrote: | | The thing in the back is not a sword. It was supposed to be the shadow of the other wing. Maybe I should have made that darker? |
It's good, but I thought that was it's 4th leg ... It only has 3 doesn't it? & Sorry but that looks a little awkward. As for the silver wing, maybe give it a green tint to make it match the dragon more? |
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Lilac
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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| PinkStar wrote: | | Oh well,, Thats just my opinion, i would show you wha ti mean by darker but I dont know how to put photos on here |
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Hm. Overall, better than I could do at fantasy creatures. Well done. I'm with you though, fantasy creatures are so much fun for the reason that there is truly no right or wrong other than what the person you are making it for(whether yourself or someone else) wants!
Well done.
The front right.. paw? xP It a bit off. The joint looks big and clunky in comparison to the others. Like people said, the left... paw.. is flat. As is the back left. Now, about your right leg, even tucked, you can almost always see some of it.
I don't know if one wing was supposed to be green, and one silver, but if both were green, both should be! LOL
The green wing, where it comes out over the shoulder, it should stay over the shoulder. But it sinks behind. I don't know if I explained that well, but I can't open any programs on the current computer to show you. |
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milon
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