Mountain Cats!

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Chapter 1:
Woah!


Thisitle padded toward Whisper's house, carefull not to rouse her care takers.

"Whisper."

"Hi Thisitle."

Whisper carefully sneaked out the back door of her house and jumped down to join Thistle. They trotted towards Thistle's house, then Thistle stopped and opened his mouth to talk.

"Whisper, I know it sounds crazy, but I've always wanted to see what was behind there..." He pointed to the gently rolling mountains that were at the edge of thier homes.

"I know, me too!" Whisper bounded over closer and then trotted back.

"I was thinking that we should go and explore there!"

"That sounds like fun! Let's go now!"

"No, not now, because if we are missing our care takers will search all over for us and they might catch us. Sneak out at night and meet me here."

"Ok, good point." Whisper then ran off toward her house. Her paw tingling with nervousness and exitement. She snuck(sp) back in her house and lay down in her bed, her head swarming with pictures and ideas of what the mysterious place would look like. Soon it was time to meet Thistle, and Whisper snuck out to meet Thistle and start their expedition.

"You ready?"

"Yeah, I couldn't sleep I was too exited."

"Me too."

"Come on let's go before our care takers spot us."

"Ok."Thistle padded toward the dark patch that was the begining of the unknown, they were leaving everything they know, and going into the unknown.

"I'm scared, Thistle."

"Don't worry Whisper, nothing is here."

"Ok, I'm still worried about my care takers."

"They will be fine."

Thistle padded on further and deeper into the unknown.
Thistle scenced(sp) that there was somthing wrong, and he told Whisper to stay put while he explored further. Suddenly somthing launched itself at him, he baddered his paws at his enemy, when he could bear the pain no more, he fell limp, his enemy backed off and ran deeper into the unknow. Thistle ran back to Whisper and together they ventured further even more curious about what was on the other side of the patch of darkness, Thistle thought There might be mountains over on the other side! What joy it would be to live there!

[Cecelia]

cool story! Can I hear more?

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Oh yes, I'm brainstorming on the second chapter still.

[ChocolateGal]

hummm.... i think i know this.... *sniggles*

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*laughs*

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Oh yeah, on chapter two some words will be bold, they will be needed for future refrence.

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Chapter 2:
Uh Oh!

Sharp pounced, he landed right where a mouse would have been if something had not scared it off, he pondered, he could hear nothing that would be a predator, but then all of the sudden he heard exited and nervous mews from house cats?!?!

He growled to the house cats, “Who are you and what are you doing here on MY territory?”

Thistle and Whisper had just gotten to the other side of the unknown, and wondered why they had never explored it sooner than this.


Thistle mewed back, “I’m sorry, we did not know that this is your territory, my name is Thistle and this is my friend
Whisper.”

“Oh well…come over here.”

Whisper and Thistle padded toward Sharp’s
voice, they wondered what he would do to them.

“Over here you usless pelts, my name is Sharp. What are you and your friend doing over here, aren’t you supposted to be with your care takers?”

“Hello Sharp, Whisper and I have always wanted to explore here, so we snuck out last night to come here, I think we somehow got lost and went the wrong way, because from my house, I could see mountains, and there are none here.”

“Yeah there are, look over to the left and up.”

Thistle and Whisper both followed Sharp’s directions and they yowled with joy to eachother, “We made it! We found the mountains!”


“Well yeah you found the mountains, even I could see them standing here and not looking directly at them.”


Thistle yawned, and all the sudden, fell tired, he mewed to Sharp, “Where do you sleep, because I’m so tired.”

“Over here, if you want a nicer place to sleep, there is none, so deal with it.”

[Demitra]

awww i Love the story write more(screaming as if in a protest)

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Thanks! I will. Don't worry.

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Chapter 3:
Truth Or Fable?


Thistle had just waken up and went to go ask Sharp what was for breakfast, when he padded over to where Sharp slept last night, Sharp’s bedding was cold.

Thistle trotted over to Whispter and mewed, “Whisper wake up, Sharp is gone and I don’t know where he is.”

“What? Where could he have gone?”

“I don’t know.”

“Why don’t we wait here and see if he comes back?”

“That sounds like a good idea Whisper!”

Thistle and Whisper waited for Sharp’s return, not too long after Thistle had discovered he had gone missing, Sharp returned with fresh kill in his mouth.


Sharp dropped a mouse in front of Whisper and Thistle’s paws.

They looked at each other and Whisper asked, “This is our breakfast?”

“Yeah, what did you expect, salmon for breakfast?”

“Well…I guess we could eat mouse…”

“Well you better because it is ethier this or you starve to death.”

See if I care Sharp thought.

“Fine.”

Whisper and Thistle started nibbling at the mouse.Soon enough they had finished it and found themselves actually enjoying the mouse. They had never had anything so good
in their lives.

Sharp thought that it was soon enough to tell them what his mother had told him about some cat clans…Yeah right, like they’re realy, mom was probably lying to make up a little baby story Sharp thought.

“Hey Thistle, Whisper, do you want to hear a story that my mother told me?”

“Sure!”

Thistle and Whisper gathered around Sharp eager to learn something from the cat.

“Ok, so once there was a cat that’s care takers never really ever knew where he was, one day he ventured outside of his house and into the patch of darkness, he hoped to find amazing stuff that other cats had talked about, they had said that there were cats that were really big and terrifying, they also explained that there were Clans in the forest,”

Sharp was cut off by Whisper who mewed, “Wow! It’s kind of like Thistle and I!”

Sharp continued his story until they were almost asleep. Sharp himself grew very tired too. Soon they all drifted off to sleep…

[ChocolateGal]

OHHHH soo cuteand adorable!!

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Chapter 4:
Exploration

“Come on Thistle hurry up, I want to go explore the woods really soon!”

“I’m coming!”

“Hey did you eat breakfast yet?”

“Yeah, I think.”

“Yeah, Whisper we did.”

“Ok, well...where are you going today?”

“We’re going to go explore the woods, why?”

“Because there are lone cats that live and are really aggressive about their territory.”

“Oh, mabye it isn’t such a good idea to explore the woods after all. Hey Sharp could you teach us to fight and hunt like you do?”

“I guess so, if it would make you two more usefull, you two could really rack in some prey if you weren’t so loud.”

“Well mabye if you teach us how to not be loud we could help you hunt and take in more prey.”

“Oh alright, come on let’s go over here, I’ll teach you how to fight first.”

“Thanks Sharp!”

Whisper and Thistle bounded over to join him.

“Ok, now first say I’m a bear and I’m trying to take your prey that you just caught, rake your claw across my nose so that it make a scratch.”

“Like this?”

Whisper raked her claws across Sharp’s nose, and just missed as Sharp ducked his head.

“Good…good, but go faster, so that it is a surprise.”

Whisper caught Sharp in the nose, he yowled in surprise.

“Did I hurt you?”

“Nope, not at all, that was great! Now your turn Thistle.”

They trained all day, and soon they were so tired.

[SMandAW]

love it thats neat!! :]

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