The Topaz Key

[odinsdottir]

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*happy again*

odinsdottir

[Demitra]

still 2007 here too and i am giving out free cookies AND milk to everyone and happy new year to everyone whether it already passed or not

[ChocolateGal]

ummm. i don't know why this is turning into a disco but..... HELLO Everyone?!? I was getting some sleep You need it trust me!! (Hehhee lol) ANyway Happy NEW Year Everyone!!!

[Demitra]

its 8:24 right at this moment here

[I_Like_Meerkats]

9:49P.M. Over Here

[DesertBabyz]

11:43 here! (eyes hurt, but PAR-TAY!!!)

[ChocolateGal]

well it was about 11am in the morning when i wrote that but now it's 5:00 pm

[ChocolateGal]

[ChocolateGal]

oh yeah i've written another chapter:

The adventure she had while walking to the city was quite extraordinary and almost too magical to believe. And this in how it happened.
Seconds turned into minutes and minutes turned into hours before Mara met anyone. A small figure appeared in the distance and steadily came into view. It was a man wearing a dusty poker-dot shirt covered by broken blue overalls. The man wasn’t waring any shoes but blocks of wood carved into the shape of a sole. On the top of the wood was a bands of leather firmly stuck on. He was travelling on a pair of shire horses pulling a large wooden cart loaded with items Mara had see in the mansion over many years. The cart drew closer and the man’s face grew frightened. For a single moment Mara didn’t know why he was alarmed but then she shooed the birds off her body so they flew above her. The cart slowed down and then stopped in front of Mara and the man looked down from on top of the horse. Now she saw the man was about 60 years old and not one scratch marked his face. Mara looked up to him and smiled politely, “Excuse me Mr, but how far is it to the nearest town?” The man smiled at her with a withered expression on his face. Mara couldn’t keep down her questions down and before he could reply, Mara burst out, “How old are you? Why aren’t you scratched? Where did you come from? What is your name and what’s in the cart?” The man beamed down at her and started to speak, “Eh, you’re a little talker, ain’t yer? I’d say another 3 miles until yer get to Penkash. Ay, me is 65 coming on 70. I come from Marlsberg close to yer Penkash deliverin’ food supplies to Mr. H Church,” Mara almost jumped back in horror as she realised that this poor man was delivering food for the last time. “Yer ok Ms?” he asked doubtfully. “Y-you is g-g-going where?” Mara stuttered. “Mr H Church, and by the look on your face you look like you’re his niece, Mara, whatever is wrong,” the old man continued. Mara paused and then looked up into his weary eyes, “You’re going to be killed,” she said tears brimming into her eyes. “Neh, don’t yer see that I haven’t any markings on me face, that’s cause me horses can do this,” Mara couldn’t move her feet and watched horrified as the horses skin began to turn silver and bubble up until it formed steel amour enclosing the horses body in a strong metal with huge sharp spikes protruded from the grey steel. On the horses head grew a helmet with only holes for eyes. Mara gave out a cry of alarm and shrank back. “Ay they not goin’ to hurt you it’s just a protection cause now a warble snorter will take charge of the horses” the old man continued, “oh where are me manners, I’m Edwards, Todd Edwards” he leaned down and then suddenly the fruit and vegetables began to rise and a humongous creature emerged covered in a green skin, protruding from it’s head were two perfectly round eyes that looked quizzically down at her, two holes for nostrils and a mouth which was now smiling down at her. Mara now understood that this was a warble snorter. Todd looked at her bearing all his white teeth, and all he said was, “Meet Gerald.”

Well is that any better

[Sterling]

[Demitra]

ummmmm..........yeah

[cutepony]

deep breath every1!!!!! there we go! chocolate girl calm down, i think your story is just brilliant! i love it and u hav a great way or putting a pen to paper (or in this case, finger to key!) Pinkstar u calm down 2! ye are both getting upset over nothing! plz sort it out and come back happy and friends!!! New year, new start!
PS I dont want to offend any1 in this post!

[ChocolateGal]

*claps* thankyou, thankyou, thankyou cutepony!!! finally a positive comment!!!!! *gives great big hug and batch of cookies*

[Demitra]

i think you did a great job too

[ChocolateGal]

THanks *makes another big batch of cookies and gives a great big hug*!!!!!