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Cowgirls Rule
Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721
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Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 1:06 pm Post subject: Memories |
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Memories
Every thought of you,
No matter how little it is,
It pulls on my
Heartstrings and
Develops a tear,
Just the memory
Of your name,
Midnight,makes me think of
Your nocturnal activity,
Only coming out at night to play,
A white and black hamster,
Not just any old hamster,
You were my Midnight,
You brought joy and happiness to my life,
You seemed to thrive for what I thought was forever.
Your pink little tail trailing behind you,
Your cute little paws trotting up and down,
Those play tubes.
I loved to watch you endlessly,
With that sweet look all the time,
I never thought your life would end so soon,
But our friendship will always last,
And your memory will last until my very last breath when I go to join you in peace,
I love you Midnight...
Last edited by Cowgirls Rule on Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:58 pm; edited 4 times in total |
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Chef33
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Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 2:04 pm Post subject: |
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i love it thanx cowgirls |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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No Problem.Thank you for letting me do a poem. |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:40 pm Post subject: |
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I would really like critique(sp). |
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Demitra
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:58 pm Post subject: |
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it is awesome |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks!I really think something could be improved in it.... |
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Demitra
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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it's perfect! |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks! I really think that I could have done a better job though. |
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Demitra
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:10 pm Post subject: |
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well just try to make the next one better thats all |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:12 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah,I'm going to have to put my poem cap on.lol |
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Sterling
Joined: 14 Aug 2007 Posts: 2790
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:32 pm Post subject: |
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Cowgirls Rule wrote: | I would really like critique(sp). |
He he he....May I? |
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cutepony
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:39 pm Post subject: |
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its great |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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Of couse Ster. |
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Sterling
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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I'll pm you. ^.^ |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:24 pm Post subject: |
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ok,*ponders* |
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