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Cowgirls Rule
Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:55 am Post subject: Oreo |
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Oreo
Written by Cowgirl Rules for Charlie1
I can still see you,picture you in my mind,you are still everywhere in my mind,you are with me every step of the way in my life,your guiding me…everywhere I look I think of you.
You loved to run in your little wheel in your “house”,it made me happy seeing you do this,with your big butterfly ears “floating” in the air on the breeze,you were black and white like a cow,
You would waddle like a penguin while you walked and I often laughed my head off at seeing you waddle,you looked so histarical.
You would run like the wind across the couch,you were like a little black and white smudge when you ran,
I can picture you sitting in my hand,innocent as can be,I never thought you would leave me so soon,you were my little sunshine,you brought light to my eyes. |
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Sterling
Joined: 14 Aug 2007 Posts: 2790
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 12:27 pm Post subject: |
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Is this about a small rodent? I kinda got the idea...
Umm...I have 1 teeny question. You wrote, "..you are guiding me.." How can a small rodent guide a large human being? |
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Cowgirls Rule
Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 10721
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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Yes,ster this is about a small rodent and 'your guding me' is I guess kind of like a.....I'm not sure how to explain it. |
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milon
Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 3649
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 8:17 pm Post subject: |
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It's figurative, not literal.
Nice poem, by the way [= |
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Cowgirls Rule
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks!Yeah its figurative. |
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