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Bay Arabian horse

 
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Juicebox



Joined: 09 Dec 2007
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:50 pm    Post subject: Bay Arabian horse Reply with quote

I drew this on Paint then colored on photoshop. I'm getting better though! Smile It's a bay arabian as the title says with green eyes. I know unrealistic color but it looks cool! Also I know what's wrong with my drawing, back legs are totally messed up and several other things, but critique is welcome. I'm really proud of the front legs and eyes. Please comment and critique!!



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Silversketches



Joined: 05 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 3:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice!

For the back legs, I'd suggest thinning them. They strike me as being too fat.

The hindquarters are to pointy, but that's easily fixed...

The only other thing I see is that the mane and tail are too spiky/pointy aswell. Manes and Tails flow, as they are sort of like human hair, except more coarse. Here's a good example of a horse tail/mane [what another artist does] [ARTIST HAS FULL RIGHTS TO EVERYTHING]



And here's a r/l arabian, with a nice tail/mane example/ref : [OWNER/PHOTOGRAHPER HAS RIGHTS TO EVERYTHING]



Hope that helps!
Love the eyes, by the way!
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Juicebox



Joined: 09 Dec 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 8:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank-you, I'll keep all your suggestions in mind next time! Oh yeah the hair lol, I think it looks kinda funky/cool but I don't know how to make it flow very well so I just do this. Rolling Eyes
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SisKate



Joined: 25 Sep 2007
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh my gosh! Your drawing is awesome!! I really like the eyes, like Silver said. Could you make one for me??!! Once again, ABSALOUTELY love the art!!! Great job!
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