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Angelicious



Joined: 31 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 9:25 pm    Post subject: Critiques? Reply with quote


I know about the green around the lips, and that she looks more like a leopard than a snow leopard, but that's both because of the overlaying. Any other critiques or comments?


This was for greenpen's contest - round one. It's too late to change the pic on the animal, but I'd like to know what to do better later Smile
I also did this version -

Which one do you like more? (Critiques & comments welcome and wanted on both.)
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Juicebox



Joined: 09 Dec 2007
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 9:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aww, the second one is really cute! <3 The first one is cool too!!
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Silversketches



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 3:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love for the second one, how the cat's head it almost 100%, which sorta makes it look like the cat is jumping out of the picture.

And for the first one, the only thing I'd say, would be to make the neck of the snow leopard less prominent, because I like the silhouetted'ness of the trees against the sunset, and that takes away from it.

Other than that, I love them! You're are really good manipulator. Of photos. Not of .... other things. XD
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Angelicious



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 5:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Juicebox - Thanks! Glad you like them =D

Silversketches - Lol, yah, that took a long time... Overlaying the body, then the regular layer, erasing the body, and bleh... Glad it's appreciated xD And that's a good point about the neck. Didn't notice it before.
And thanks very much Very Happy
Out of curiosity - what else is there to manipulate? Other manipulations? Eh?
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Silversketches



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 5:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Angelicious wrote:
Juicebox - Thanks! Glad you like them =D

Silversketches - Lol, yah, that took a long time... Overlaying the body, then the regular layer, erasing the body, and bleh... Glad it's appreciated xD And that's a good point about the neck. Didn't notice it before.
And thanks very much Very Happy
Out of curiosity - what else is there to manipulate? Other manipulations? Eh?


Well, like a manipulator of people...when they...manipulate someone...
XD
That's so dumb sounding, but it's all I got.
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Queso



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like the first one, but I agree with Silver, the neck is a bit distrating. Over all though, very lovely!
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